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Esteemed thinker
Join Date: May 2008
Location: In a townhouse over looking the tumble weed fields.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Have a Good Day Uncle Jim.
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Tlilticcíhuatl
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Mexico!!
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Oh, is it today?
HAPPY B-DAY, UNCLE JIM!!
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Dragon rider
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Lurking somewhere in dark places...
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Oooops... There's a whole thread dedicated to birthday wishes for Uncle Jim in Office Party. Hadn't seen it till just now...
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Your Genial Uncle
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Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: New Hampshire
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Thanks, all.
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A Grumpy Old Owl
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Michigan
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Happy B-Day Uncle Jim!
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Your Genial Uncle
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Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: New Hampshire
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Good people all, d'ye know what you could do for my birthday? Order a copy of Salt and Silver by my beloved elder daughter, Katherine Juliana.
It's her first novel, and I'm intensely proud of her (for all that she hasn't allowed me to read it, and didn't mention that she'd written it until after it sold.....)
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我的身分還是秘密.
Join Date: May 2006
Location: 神出鬼没像那暗夜的噩夢.
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Otherwise Occupied
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: In married bliss. Who knew it could be so fun?
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You must be so proud of her. Congrats to both of you.
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Your Genial Uncle
Absolute Sage
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: New Hampshire
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Impediments aid art. Add restrictions rather than take them away.
Here is a zombie story written on a Twitter: http://cavalaxis.blogspot.com/2009/0...s-at-time.html The only thing that I'd change is to delete the line It was like watching a bad B movie. Because that would remind the reader that this is a bad B movie. (And has been, and will be. Thus you never have your character say "You sound like the villain in a cheap romance!" lest the readers say, "Y'know, you're right," and seek something other than a cheap romance for their reading pleasure. Nor do you have your scientist/inventor say of her invention, "It sounds like something out of science fiction, but...."
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New Fish; Learning About Thick Skin
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Jackson, Michigan
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Hmmm, I wonder if "I know it sounds like a line from a Newberry Award winner, but..." would work.
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Your Genial Uncle
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Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: New Hampshire
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No, I don't think so. The characters can not be aware that they're in a work of art.
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Sick and absent
Join Date: Apr 2006
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In Pamela Dean's Secret Country trilogy, the well-read kid characters and up falling into another world, and keep trying to figure out how things will work there with "Well in Narnia, no time passes at home..." and such reasoning. And of course, they're wrong every time ![]() Part of why that didn't make me, as a reader, more aware that I was reading a book is that -- well! The "kids falling into other world" trope is so established that it would have been weirder if these kids were not aware of it -- and also the series revolves largely around that tension between what's make-believe and what's real.
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Esteemed thinker
Join Date: May 2008
Location: In a townhouse over looking the tumble weed fields.
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Uncle Jim,
I have a question. Yeah I know. Laugh. Anyway, would it be wrong to write: He yelled across the room "Don't go there!" Or would it be better to write: "Don't go there!" He said looking at Sam across the room. If I've confused you my question is this. Is it just better to use "said?" Instead of declared, yelled, rambled. . .
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In Honor of Peter Tomich,USS Utah
Join Date: May 2007
Location: King Louie's town
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Remind me of Salt and Silver again on FRiday.
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Tlilticcíhuatl
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Mexico!!
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Have you never read El Quijote?
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Vagrant Story
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: New Brigadoon
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Breaking the fourth wall is one of those things that you can make work, but there are eight and sixty very good reasons not to.
Putting a character into a fictional world (Neverending Story) isn't the same as breaking the fourth wall. "I'm in a story world" is more "I'm an intruder into this story world" and it's worked. "This world seems to behave like Narnia" works as well-- Narnia is part of the literary canon so it's not inconceivable for a story character to refer to it. Characters believing they're the main character in a story isn't too far, either. As in real life, many characters like to imagine themselves as the hero in a fairy tale, as the lead character in some wonderful story, or, if you live in the suburbs, as a cast member in a soap opera. It works when they're wrong-- they may think they're in a story, as long as they don't know it's yours. When your character believes she's in a remake of Pride & Prejudice, she'd best be wrong or your readers won't bother with your remake of Emma.
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Your Genial Uncle
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He yelled, "Don't go there!" or maybe: "Don't go there," he yelled. He said looking at Sam across the room is clumsy. Said-words are a spice. You wouldn't want your page to read: Quote:
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New Fish; Learning About Thick Skin
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Jackson, Michigan
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My favorite is still:
"Shut up," I explained. |
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Esteemed thinker
Join Date: May 2008
Location: In a townhouse over looking the tumble weed fields.
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Hi Uncle Jim
I have a question. Will I get in trouble for mentioning REAL book titles in a story without saying please? Or do I have to say please?
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Hapless Virago
Join Date: Nov 2007
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It's either a centerpiece or nothing. It's actually Are you lost daddy I arsked tenderly. Shut up he explained. From The Young Immigrunts by Ring Lardner, Jr. (probably actually by Ring Lardner, Sr.--written as a parody of The Young Visiters by Daisy Ashford, which was a hit the previous year.) Last edited by IceCreamEmpress; 02-26-2009 at 03:30 AM. |
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Your Genial Uncle
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Titles can't be copyrighted.
Be sure that mentioning the titles is vital to the story; at the same time be sure that people who haven't read those works will still "get" your story. (Or, not. I recently had a story published in which I had the protagonist reading Grimm's Deutsche Mythologie. Many of my readers would be unfamiliar with this book.)
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Esteemed thinker
Join Date: May 2008
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Thanks Uncle Jim.
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Where did I put me specs?
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Paradise
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Ordered a copy of Daisy Ashford's book from Amazon
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Your Genial Uncle
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Free Lessons in Cyberspace for Genre Writers
A collection of useful links from a speculative mystery writer.
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Your Genial Uncle
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The Young Visiters; or, Mr. Salteena's Plan by Daisy Ashford. A novel, from 1919. It went into multiple printings in its first year.
Ms. Ashford was nine years old when she wrote it. The novel was turned into a stage play, which ran in New York and London in 1920.
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