William. your new avatar

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Bret,

Sorry, but this piece does nothing for me. Flat start, flat finish... but the meter's consistent at least.

You can do much better, bro.
 

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William's just experimenting with cloning himself. I would say his latest batch has turned out quite well.
 

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i thought they might be his pets. 'precious...my darlings'
 

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so much
depends
upon

the correct
dosage
given

frantic
eyes weep
colors

inside
the
jumping
avatar
 

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If we drill a hole in his skull will it let them out?
 

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What, pray tell, will you be doing with William's amygdala? You're not going to crush it up and smoke it with my ashes, I hope!
 

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ssh! don't tell. then everyone will want some.
 

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Reminds me of one of those really old scifi movies that when you see it in present terms, it's hilarious to think that it use to be frightening.

Also, jumping beans in boogiemen costumes.
 

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kdnxdr said:
Can we have a contest to name the demons in Williams head?

I don't think that would be possible. There's too many. Way too many. Those are just the few that escaped. Just refer to them as "Legion" and they'll be happy.
 

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William,

I want you know that I appreciate you very much, regardless of what's in your head. I hope you did not switch avatars because of us funnin' with you. If so, I want to apologize for any offense.

Now, I miss the jumpy one.

kid