Oh the (In)humanity! or Writing Nonhuman Protagonists

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Since my main character is a dragon albeit one forced to be in human form the majority of the time I find it great fun trying to figure out how a dragon would handle situations that are an everyday aspect of being human, what their perspective would be on traits mankind has that their own species do not, and other such issues along those lines. So I was curious how others handle writing nonhuman characters that are not villains/monster of the week type characters.

Considering most writers are human (or so they'd lead us to believe) how do you personally incorporate a nonhuman perspective? Do you use them as a means to make commentary on mankind? Foist human issues onto a supernatural being and see how they handle them differently? Do you ever worry that readers won't relate to nonhumans? Are you ever concerned that as a result you get preachy? I find the whole concept interesting so please, discuss away.
 

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I have a lot of fun adding animal traits of my shapeshifters to their human halves. My wolves are very family oriented, one cat was embarrassed to admit that she stalks the bird feeder at her mom's house, and the birds tend to be vain and preen constantly. :)

For a dragon, I would imagine a good career would be a welder or a glassblower--something near flame. Maybe they insist on only living in the penthouse apartment, where they can look out over the city (and makes it easier to take off after shifting forms.)
 

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Considering most writers are human (or so they'd lead us to believe)

I'm not.... :chair

Since my main character is a dragon albeit one forced to be in human form the majority of the time I find it great fun trying to figure out how a dragon would handle situations that are an everyday aspect of being human, what their perspective would be on traits mankind has that their own species do not, and other such issues along those lines. So I was curious how others handle writing nonhuman characters that are not villains/monster of the week type characters.

I usually use it for worldbuilding jokes, many of which quite rightly never make it to the final MS. My dragons are vegetarians, for instance. You can use mythology, etc.

how do you personally incorporate a nonhuman perspective? Do you use them as a means to make commentary on mankind? Foist human issues onto a supernatural being and see how they handle them differently? ... Are you ever concerned that as a result you get preachy?

Depends. Despite all the advice against writing anthro characters, the only compelling argument I've heard against it is the furry porn thing. I don't like reducing any character to a particular perspective. I think if one is going to use animals or non-humans there should be something gained by it, but my standards are quite low in this regard. Many of my favourite books have non-human characters, sometimes more and sometimes less human-like. It's funny how often I meet other readers who love these books, too.

Any fictional universe we write is going to say something, by natural extension it will often involve mankind, especially in science fiction. The temptation might be to make this some big commentary but any character relates to any theme in a certain way, even obliviously (whether or the character's part or the writer's depends). A non-human character introduces an element of difference, but difference does not have to be important.

It should be explained, though, at least within the world's broader suspension of disbelief.

Do you ever worry that readers won't relate to nonhumans?

Always. I'm not an anthro writer, I just have a WIP that went that way kind of instinctually and the whole thing just works better since that occurred, so I go with it. One of those gut things I can't really explain. My favourite character is a rabbit. It's not because she's a rabbit but because of who she is and what she does, but similarly she would not have been able to do those things without being a rabbit. This is my defense against the worrying over relatability. I have no idea if it's adequate but it's what I've got.

Though now I come to think of it, an impromptu list of my favourite characters in any story (including other media here) would probably include an undead, a squirrel, an elf, a quarian, a lion, and an Ix from Betelgeuse 7.

I find the whole concept interesting so please, discuss away.
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Hmm, a dragon locked in human form might regret his current inability to end arguments by eating the opponent, for instance. I visualize some dragon variation of Sheldon Cooper trying to choke Leonard with the force. Dragon keeps trying to immolate people by breathing heavily on them.
 

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Hmm, a dragon locked in human form might regret his current inability to end arguments by eating the opponent, for instance. I visualize some dragon variation of Sheldon Cooper trying to choke Leonard with the force. Dragon keeps trying to immolate people by breathing heavily on them.

I sure wish there was a like button.
 

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Hmm, a dragon locked in human form might regret his current inability to end arguments by eating the opponent, for instance. I visualize some dragon variation of Sheldon Cooper trying to choke Leonard with the force. Dragon keeps trying to immolate people by breathing heavily on them.

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The aliens I'm working on see and communicate across the entire electromagnetic spectrum. At least, so far as the humans that encounter them can tell.
 

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You might want to read Rachel Aaron's Nice Dragons Finish Last. It's about a dragon living in human form, and it's an urban fantasy. I haven't read it yet, but it does deal with something similar.

At the moment, it's only out as a self-published e-book, but Aaron has been published through Orbit for other project.
 

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Hmm, a dragon locked in human form might regret his current inability to end arguments by eating the opponent, for instance. I visualize some dragon variation of Sheldon Cooper trying to choke Leonard with the force. Dragon keeps trying to immolate people by breathing heavily on them.

Okay now that I can breathe again I just wanted to say that, that is quite possibly the most hilarious and brilliant thing I've heard in a long time. Well done sir.
 

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Hmm, a dragon locked in human form might regret his current inability to end arguments by eating the opponent, for instance. I visualize some dragon variation of Sheldon Cooper trying to choke Leonard with the force. Dragon keeps trying to immolate people by breathing heavily on them.

Love it! Now I have one hilarious mental image that I can't get rid of.

Considering most writers are human (or so they'd lead us to believe) how do you personally incorporate a nonhuman perspective? Do you use them as a means to make commentary on mankind? Foist human issues onto a supernatural being and see how they handle them differently?

Depends 100% on the story. In my WIPs that are in my signature, they are used in different ways. In Phantasm Bastion I don't really focus at all on any human issues. It's very much a story based on a specific group of nonhumans and a struggle within their world. Humans are really only there as a background in the city, as food for the Vamps, or a handful that are brought into the world of the nonhumans.

On the other hand, in The Dark Messenger it is almost based totally on a commentary of human kind since the Others are split between preying on them and protecting them. Plus, the world (Terra) is very much alive and aware what is going on and is reacting to it. Humans have a huge impact on that as well.

Do you ever worry that readers won't relate to nonhumans?

Not at all actually. My nonhumans still feel pain, love, sadness... the same host of emotions as a human would. They still have to deal with problems and solve them. They are just as fleshed out as any other character in any other book. Will there be people who won't relate? Yea, but my guess is that those are also the people who won't enjoy the type of book I write or the worlds I come up with. Not every book is for every person... and not every character is for every person.
 

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For a dragon, I would imagine a good career would be a welder or a glassblower--something near flame. Maybe they insist on only living in the penthouse apartment, where they can look out over the city (and makes it easier to take off after shifting forms.)

It’s as if you read my mind. Aden, the main character, lives in a room above a bar. He specifically requested the upper room for that very purpose. Also, his weapons dealer/procurer of rare magical artifacts is a fellow dragon. Her day job just so happens to be a high steel welder!
 

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Not at all actually. My nonhumans still feel pain, love, sadness... the same host of emotions as a human would. They still have to deal with problems and solve them. They are just as fleshed out as any other character in any other book. Will there be people who won't relate? Yea, but my guess is that those are also the people who won't enjoy the type of book I write or the worlds I come up with. Not every book is for every person... and not every character is for every person.

Look at the movie District 9 for an example of utterly non-human characters who are still empathetic and relatable. You make the audience care about a non-human character the same way you make them care about a human one: make them people.