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Old 09-06-2006, 03:12 AM   #2076
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what could be inside?
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your secret passion?
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Old 09-06-2006, 03:19 AM   #2077
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Old 09-06-2006, 04:43 AM   #2078
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Old 09-06-2006, 05:22 AM   #2079
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giggles like a child
fill the air and float away
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Old 09-06-2006, 12:00 PM   #2080
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bubbles on the wind
sticky mixture gently blown
carried by giggles
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Old 09-06-2006, 12:03 PM   #2081
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Godfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudgeGodfather is better than ice cream with hot fudge
carried by giggles
she laughs and twirls in the rain.
it just takes one joke.
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Old 09-06-2006, 01:23 PM   #2082
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it just takes one joke
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Old 09-06-2006, 02:46 PM   #2083
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mood in a meeting
spells disaster not success
meeting of the minds
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Old 09-06-2006, 07:05 PM   #2084
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Kate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsKate Thornton is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
meeting of the minds
bodies awash in colors
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Old 09-06-2006, 08:14 PM   #2085
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perfect harmony
spinning spheres dance together
to the end of time
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Old 09-06-2006, 11:50 PM   #2086
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to the end of time,
the beginning of a world -
beyond mere living
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Old 09-07-2006, 12:24 AM   #2087
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Ganesha should run for PresidentGanesha should run for PresidentGanesha should run for PresidentGanesha should run for PresidentGanesha should run for PresidentGanesha should run for President
"beyond mere living,"
said the mere cat to the brown
mouse, before he ate
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Old 09-07-2006, 12:33 AM   #2088
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Mouse, before he ate
ran to hide in his hole home
savoring the cheese
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Old 09-07-2006, 12:54 AM   #2089
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savoring the cheese -
doing the comedy thing,
hiding the fragile
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Old 09-07-2006, 01:05 AM   #2090
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hiding the fragile
ego behind my back I
try to see my id
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Old 09-07-2006, 01:07 AM   #2091
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try to see my id
you think I'm only a doll -
this doll has got claws
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Old 09-07-2006, 01:57 AM   #2092
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this doll has got claws
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Old 09-07-2006, 02:10 AM   #2093
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pheromones in motion
bodies sliding without sound
to music of lust
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Old 09-07-2006, 02:11 AM   #2094
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pheromones in motion
schedule ovulation
we're all together
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Old 09-07-2006, 02:11 AM   #2095
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to music of lust
rapturous synchopation
forget the world
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Old 09-07-2006, 07:10 AM   #2096
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forget the world
my friend has left-- far away
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Old 09-07-2006, 07:12 AM   #2097
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nothing matters now
pain, lust and love disappear
dark oblivion
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Old 09-07-2006, 10:08 AM   #2098
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dark oblivion
strange sounds assault virgin ears
litter of seven
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Old 09-07-2006, 05:31 PM   #2099
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while dressed to the nines
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Old 09-07-2006, 05:49 PM   #2100
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i'm at sixes and sevens
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