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Old 08-29-2006, 04:09 PM   #1951
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catch a beautiful salmon
who to share it with?
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Old 08-29-2006, 09:43 PM   #1952
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Old 08-29-2006, 10:50 PM   #1953
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Old 08-29-2006, 10:51 PM   #1954
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of the river wild,
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Old 08-29-2006, 11:03 PM   #1955
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Old 08-29-2006, 11:26 PM   #1956
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Old 08-29-2006, 11:58 PM   #1957
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Old 08-30-2006, 01:13 AM   #1958
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I'd like some more, please
more of your face, your sweet cheeks
ah, to look at you...
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Old 08-30-2006, 01:38 AM   #1959
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Old 08-30-2006, 01:47 AM   #1960
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how looks can decieve,
it looked like you wanted to
know me... i was wrong.




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Old 08-30-2006, 01:53 AM   #1961
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Old 08-30-2006, 01:59 AM   #1962
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I am all I know
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Old 08-30-2006, 02:43 AM   #1963
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Old 08-30-2006, 02:45 AM   #1964
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Only who I am
If I just knew who that was
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Old 08-30-2006, 02:55 AM   #1965
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hero or villain,
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Old 08-30-2006, 03:42 AM   #1966
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Old 08-30-2006, 03:50 AM   #1967
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humans do it all the time
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Old 08-30-2006, 04:06 AM   #1968
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Old 08-30-2006, 04:11 AM   #1969
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Old 08-30-2006, 04:34 AM   #1970
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Old 08-30-2006, 06:20 PM   #1972
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Old 08-30-2006, 06:27 PM   #1973
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Old 08-30-2006, 06:38 PM   #1974
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