Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools - Page 61

Rivana · 07-29-2006, 09:52 PM

what was third again?
the commandment of the weak -
to blame another. . .

edit.
Guh, I can't believe I put that nature thing in the wrong thread. It was supposed to go in haikuicide, I'm moving it there and writing another here to keep the flow.

Godfather · 07-29-2006, 11:18 PM

to blame another
to take his wife in your bed
its right in your eyes

paprikapink · 07-30-2006, 12:26 AM

its right in your eyes
my right to say nay or aye
starlights in our eyes

Rivana · 07-30-2006, 02:15 AM

starlights in our eyes
feels like a benediction
as the world blows up

emeraldcite · 07-30-2006, 03:07 AM

and the world blows up,
we are sparkles in the dark
looking for the light.

LimeyDawg · 07-30-2006, 07:49 AM

looking for the light
we should seek the inner spark
for our greater truths

P.H.Delarran · 07-30-2006, 01:13 PM

for our greater truths
patriots convened, haggled;
signed with quill and ink

ddgryphon · 07-30-2006, 02:08 PM

Signed with quill and ink
windows into many worlds
open and waiting

trumancoyote · 07-30-2006, 03:15 PM

Open and waiting...
God, this is way too easy.
I'll never grow up.

Shiraz · 07-30-2006, 05:14 PM

I'll never grow up
even if mom wants me to
it's way, way too hard

drachin8 · 07-30-2006, 07:49 PM

it's way, way too hard,
dried and burnt, parched like my throat.
what of our cake now?

emeraldcite · 07-30-2006, 11:49 PM

What of our cake now?
It has fallen flat because
we have no patience.

Godfather · 07-31-2006, 02:29 AM

we have no patience,
we drive then get out and run,
oh what will happen?

Ganesha · 07-31-2006, 06:50 AM

oh what will happen?
with so many dying: bombs
exploding over me

poetinahat · 07-31-2006, 08:48 AM

exploding over me
maple helicopters and
dandelion seeds

Ganesha · 07-31-2006, 08:58 AM

dandelion seeds
in the air like so many
fires, I blow hard

poetinahat · 07-31-2006, 09:14 AM

fires, I blow hard
but it's the frosting I want
shut eyes, sink the knife

P.H.Delarran · 07-31-2006, 09:27 AM

shut eyes, sink the knife
think ahead to dinner when
skinning a catfish

LimeyDawg · 07-31-2006, 11:02 AM

skinning a catfish
such difficult painful work
yields sweet fried delight

poetinahat · 07-31-2006, 04:04 PM

yields sweet, fried delight
even reptiles love donuts
grease is good, gekko!

Godfather · 07-31-2006, 04:09 PM

grease is good, gekko!
don't you just love that fried smell?
from the dirty pan?

PrettySpecialGal · 07-31-2006, 05:21 PM

from the dirty pan?
you really expect for me
to cook in that thing?

laurel29 · 07-31-2006, 05:59 PM

To cook in that thing
(is) sinister negligence
the fate of a child

(The is in parethesis is there because I couldn't decide how many syllables negligence has

- I think I need it but I'm not sure)

Godfather · 07-31-2006, 06:11 PM

the fate of a child,
should be beautiful, instead
a tragic let-down.

Rivana · 07-31-2006, 10:21 PM

a tragic let-down -
she was looking for a man,
found only man-boys

07-29-2006, 09:52 PM	#1501
Rivana Walks in the shades. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 1,546	what was third again? the commandment of the weak - to blame another. . . edit. Guh, I can't believe I put that nature thing in the wrong thread. It was supposed to go in haikuicide, I'm moving it there and writing another here to keep the flow. __________________ www.rivanacreations.com Last edited by Rivana; 07-30-2006 at 02:13 AM.

07-29-2006, 11:18 PM	#1502
Godfather back door man Join Date: May 2005 Location: the right place at the wrong time Posts: 3,554	to blame another to take his wife in your bed its right in your eyes __________________ He could not get out the answer for the sum but it did not matter. White roses and red roses: those were beautiful colours to think of. - Joyce

07-30-2006, 02:15 AM	#1504
Rivana Walks in the shades. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 1,546	starlights in our eyes feels like a benediction as the world blows up __________________ www.rivanacreations.com

07-30-2006, 03:07 AM	#1505
emeraldcite Art is Resistance Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Florida Posts: 2,465	and the world blows up, we are sparkles in the dark looking for the light. __________________ I Have Measured Out My Life with Coffee Spoons ... And I've Found Tea to be Better My characters make morally ambiguous decisions in order to advance the plot. Twittering -- it's like crack for bloggers

07-30-2006, 01:13 PM	#1507
P.H.Delarran here for a minute...catch me? Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: N. Cali Posts: 4,586	for our greater truths patriots convened, haggled; signed with quill and ink __________________ ~hope to see you again. Absolute Poetry, Vol. 1 - out now

07-30-2006, 12:26 AM	#1503
paprikapink Bored fanatic Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: yonder Posts: 2,195	its right in your eyes my right to say nay or aye starlights in our eyes

07-30-2006, 07:49 AM	#1506
LimeyDawg practical experience, FTW Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Room 101 Posts: 2,768	looking for the light we should seek the inner spark for our greater truths

07-30-2006, 02:08 PM	#1508
ddgryphon King of Sloth Town Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: in exile Posts: 2,339	Signed with quill and ink windows into many worlds open and waiting __________________ Music Page My AW Collection I'm a Deviant ~ If Love is a shelter I want to walk in the rain. ~

07-30-2006, 03:15 PM	#1509
trumancoyote My Name is Sweet Thing Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Arizona Posts: 2,706	Open and waiting... God, this is way too easy. I'll never grow up. __________________ "I don't understand," Hans Castorp said. "I don't understand how someone can not be a smoker -- why it's like robbing oneself of the best part of life, so to speak, or at least of an absolutely first-rate pleasure." The Magic Mountain - Thomas Mann (John E. Woods, Trnsl.)

07-30-2006, 05:14 PM	#1510
Shiraz New kid, be gentle! Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 599	I'll never grow up even if mom wants me to it's way, way too hard __________________ Shiraz If we are honest, faithful, constructive and disciplined in our behavior, we will ultimately reap blessings for the good crops we have sown.

07-30-2006, 07:49 PM	#1511
drachin8 post-apocalyptic bunny Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: DFW, Texas Posts: 1,070	it's way, way too hard, dried and burnt, parched like my throat. what of our cake now?

07-30-2006, 11:49 PM	#1512
emeraldcite Art is Resistance Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Florida Posts: 2,465	What of our cake now? It has fallen flat because we have no patience. __________________ I Have Measured Out My Life with Coffee Spoons ... And I've Found Tea to be Better My characters make morally ambiguous decisions in order to advance the plot. Twittering -- it's like crack for bloggers

07-31-2006, 02:29 AM	#1513
Godfather back door man Join Date: May 2005 Location: the right place at the wrong time Posts: 3,554	we have no patience, we drive then get out and run, oh what will happen? __________________ He could not get out the answer for the sum but it did not matter. White roses and red roses: those were beautiful colours to think of. - Joyce

07-31-2006, 06:50 AM	#1514
Ganesha con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Vermont Posts: 2,012	oh what will happen? with so many dying: bombs exploding over me __________________ If I'd had more time, I'd have written a shorter letter. Mark Twain

07-31-2006, 08:48 AM	#1515
poetinahat come in, all you jesters SuperModerator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: enter, all you fools Posts: 19,903	exploding over me maple helicopters and dandelion seeds __________________ 8. Rewrite until it stops being a horrible incoherent mess (in other people's opinion, because what do I know). -- RichardGarfinkle

07-31-2006, 08:58 AM	#1516
Ganesha con·ver·sa·tion·al·ist Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Vermont Posts: 2,012	dandelion seeds in the air like so many fires, I blow hard __________________ If I'd had more time, I'd have written a shorter letter. Mark Twain

07-31-2006, 09:14 AM	#1517
poetinahat come in, all you jesters SuperModerator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: enter, all you fools Posts: 19,903	fires, I blow hard but it's the frosting I want shut eyes, sink the knife __________________ 8. Rewrite until it stops being a horrible incoherent mess (in other people's opinion, because what do I know). -- RichardGarfinkle

07-31-2006, 09:27 AM	#1518
P.H.Delarran here for a minute...catch me? Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: N. Cali Posts: 4,586	shut eyes, sink the knife think ahead to dinner when skinning a catfish __________________ ~hope to see you again. Absolute Poetry, Vol. 1 - out now

07-31-2006, 11:02 AM	#1519
LimeyDawg practical experience, FTW Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Room 101 Posts: 2,768	skinning a catfish such difficult painful work yields sweet fried delight

07-31-2006, 04:04 PM	#1520
poetinahat come in, all you jesters SuperModerator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: enter, all you fools Posts: 19,903	yields sweet, fried delight even reptiles love donuts grease is good, gekko! __________________ 8. Rewrite until it stops being a horrible incoherent mess (in other people's opinion, because what do I know). -- RichardGarfinkle

07-31-2006, 04:09 PM	#1521
Godfather back door man Join Date: May 2005 Location: the right place at the wrong time Posts: 3,554	grease is good, gekko! don't you just love that fried smell? from the dirty pan? __________________ He could not get out the answer for the sum but it did not matter. White roses and red roses: those were beautiful colours to think of. - Joyce

07-31-2006, 05:21 PM	#1522
PrettySpecialGal roll, roll, roll in ze hay Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: wis ze "photographer husband" Posts: 2,026	from the dirty pan? you really expect for me to cook in that thing? __________________ PSG LOOK!!! here, too--> FREE_TEXAS

07-31-2006, 05:59 PM	#1523
laurel29 has a lopsided smile. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in a galaxy far, far away Posts: 652	To cook in that thing (is) sinister negligence the fate of a child (The is in parethesis is there because I couldn't decide how many syllables negligence has - I think I need it but I'm not sure)

07-31-2006, 06:11 PM	#1524
Godfather back door man Join Date: May 2005 Location: the right place at the wrong time Posts: 3,554	the fate of a child, should be beautiful, instead a tragic let-down. __________________ He could not get out the answer for the sum but it did not matter. White roses and red roses: those were beautiful colours to think of. - Joyce

07-31-2006, 10:21 PM	#1525
Rivana Walks in the shades. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 1,546	a tragic let-down - she was looking for a man, found only man-boys __________________ www.rivanacreations.com

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