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Old 07-29-2006, 09:52 PM   #1501
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what was third again?
the commandment of the weak -
to blame another. . .

edit.
Guh, I can't believe I put that nature thing in the wrong thread. It was supposed to go in haikuicide, I'm moving it there and writing another here to keep the flow.
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Old 07-29-2006, 11:18 PM   #1502
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Old 07-30-2006, 12:26 AM   #1503
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my right to say nay or aye
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Old 07-30-2006, 02:15 AM   #1504
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Old 07-30-2006, 03:07 AM   #1505
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we are sparkles in the dark
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Old 07-30-2006, 07:49 AM   #1506
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Old 07-30-2006, 01:13 PM   #1507
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patriots convened, haggled;
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Old 07-30-2006, 02:08 PM   #1508
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Old 07-30-2006, 03:15 PM   #1509
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God, this is way too easy.
I'll never grow up.
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Old 07-30-2006, 05:14 PM   #1510
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Old 07-30-2006, 07:49 PM   #1511
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it's way, way too hard,
dried and burnt, parched like my throat.
what of our cake now?
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Old 07-30-2006, 11:49 PM   #1512
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What of our cake now?
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Old 07-31-2006, 02:29 AM   #1513
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we have no patience,
we drive then get out and run,
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Old 07-31-2006, 06:50 AM   #1514
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oh what will happen?
with so many dying: bombs
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Old 07-31-2006, 08:48 AM   #1515
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Old 07-31-2006, 08:58 AM   #1516
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fires, I blow hard
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Old 07-31-2006, 09:27 AM   #1518
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shut eyes, sink the knife
think ahead to dinner when
skinning a catfish
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Old 07-31-2006, 11:02 AM   #1519
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yields sweet, fried delight
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grease is good, gekko!
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Old 07-31-2006, 04:09 PM   #1521
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grease is good, gekko!
don't you just love that fried smell?
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Old 07-31-2006, 05:21 PM   #1522
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Old 07-31-2006, 05:59 PM   #1523
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the fate of a child

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the fate of a child,
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Old 07-31-2006, 10:21 PM   #1525
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a tragic let-down -
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