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Old 03-05-2012, 11:20 PM   #8001
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And then we are gone --
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Old 03-06-2012, 02:17 AM   #8002
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Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
left unspeakable
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Old 03-06-2012, 11:09 AM   #8003
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Spoken, now broken
love pierces this heart in shards
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Old 03-06-2012, 11:21 PM   #8004
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Reflecting the light,
those sparkly vampires just suck
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Old 03-07-2012, 01:02 AM   #8005
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Old 03-07-2012, 06:03 AM   #8006
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Fender on a bike--
purple mountains mystery
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Old 03-08-2012, 03:00 AM   #8007
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lunch at Donner Pass
Prancer Dancer and Blitzen
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Old 03-08-2012, 07:05 AM   #8008
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Take the whole bag if you want
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Old 03-08-2012, 10:00 AM   #8009
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Never find better
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you won't deserve it.
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Old 03-08-2012, 02:56 PM   #8010
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you won't deserve it
but you'll take it, hands firmly
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Old 03-09-2012, 05:55 AM   #8011
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clasped around its neck
was a spiked leather collar
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Old 03-09-2012, 08:58 AM   #8012
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Old 03-09-2012, 09:20 AM   #8013
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others before self,
raising the moral question,
what is common good?
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Old 03-09-2012, 03:40 PM   #8014
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what is common good //
byron-why // curious how //
when/where? // you is who
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Old 03-09-2012, 04:43 PM   #8015
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when/where? // you is who
Who is first, What is second
Like Bud and Lou said.
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Old 03-10-2012, 12:34 AM   #8016
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Like Bud and Lou said,
"We're no Laurel and Hardy,
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Old 03-10-2012, 12:53 AM   #8017
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but who is, these days
the head or the tail; who cares?
the middle voice counts
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Old 03-10-2012, 08:50 AM   #8018
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The middle voice counts.
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Old 03-10-2012, 10:50 AM   #8019
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Old 03-11-2012, 05:28 AM   #8021
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give the man his dues,
make him pay 'till he sings the blues -
where's the love, baby?
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Old 03-11-2012, 07:10 AM   #8022
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Where's the love, baby?
You said we'd last forever,
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Old 03-11-2012, 08:14 AM   #8023
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Only yesterday
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Hi Blarg,

Sorry, but I think we both did this bit simultaneously( but I like yours better!)
Hope it's ok if I try again with the tail bit of your haiku:

Under lock and key
much angst - yours, mine, his and hers,
will the world explode?
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