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Old 02-27-2012, 02:28 AM   #7951
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Row, row, row, your boat.
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Old 02-27-2012, 03:01 AM   #7952
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Old 02-27-2012, 09:14 PM   #7954
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Old 02-27-2012, 11:17 PM   #7955
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Old 02-28-2012, 12:35 AM   #7956
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Old 02-28-2012, 12:36 AM   #7957
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Old 02-28-2012, 07:11 PM   #7959
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Heil Mordekaiser!
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Old 02-28-2012, 10:10 PM   #7961
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Coming through the rye,
I paused to watch the clouds, and
fell into the sky.
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Old 02-29-2012, 03:04 AM   #7962
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Old 02-29-2012, 03:38 AM   #7963
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Peaceful place to die
wrapped up in your soft cocoon—
Butterflies take flight.
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Old 02-29-2012, 07:30 AM   #7964
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butterflies take flight
following unseen skyways;
seek the beautiful
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Seek the beautiful --
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Old 02-29-2012, 07:27 PM   #7966
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bursting dominions
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Old 03-01-2012, 01:49 AM   #7967
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No room to flap wings,
fledglings perch at nest's edge—
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Old 03-01-2012, 06:33 AM   #7968
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Waiting for a breeze
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Oops, wrong direction.
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Old 03-01-2012, 10:05 AM   #7969
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Oops, wrong direction --
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Old 03-01-2012, 10:13 AM   #7970
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fell all the way up
looking down; prayer my guide
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On the way to God
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Old 03-01-2012, 10:41 AM   #7972
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he never let go,
that parasite, life-sucker!
I'm glad that I did.
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Old 03-01-2012, 11:36 AM   #7973
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im glad that its done today
im glad that haiku
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Old 03-01-2012, 01:25 PM   #7975
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i could write this poem
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