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Old 02-05-2012, 05:15 PM   #7851
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What we wanted shrunk;
disappointed was the look—
there's a pill for that.
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Old 02-05-2012, 06:56 PM   #7852
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when here is so easy. take
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Old 02-05-2012, 09:35 PM   #7853
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This synthetic love
Mediated by TV,
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Old 02-06-2012, 04:53 AM   #7854
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Needs? Commercial breaks
come in handy when you've had
way too much bean dip.
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Old 02-08-2012, 05:44 AM   #7855
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Way too much bean dip
made those two soggy nachos
late to the party.
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Old 02-08-2012, 06:01 AM   #7856
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Late to the party,
the last orange leaf circles --
small spark on the wind.
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Old 02-08-2012, 06:52 AM   #7857
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Small spark, on the wind
of chance you'll bounce off into
a blazing sunset.
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Old 02-08-2012, 07:11 AM   #7858
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A blazing sunset,
Lebowskiing, white Russian --
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Old 02-08-2012, 11:37 AM   #7859
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'read the writer, hear them sing!'
'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie'
'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal'

'the world must upgrade in mentality'
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Old 02-08-2012, 01:01 PM   #7860
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Old 02-08-2012, 01:01 PM   #7861
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Old 02-08-2012, 02:33 PM   #7862
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tense is inverted
changes feel incredible
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'read the writer, hear them sing!'
'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie'
'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal'

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Old 02-08-2012, 11:39 PM   #7863
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Better believe it
will boil down to desert beds
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Old 02-09-2012, 12:36 AM   #7864
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Before it drowns me,
some in this deluge of days
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Old 02-09-2012, 03:56 AM   #7865
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rise to crisp, soft air
a morning piss melting frost
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Old 02-09-2012, 03:13 PM   #7866
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fume from truck's exhaust
dissipate and disappear
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'read the writer, hear them sing!'
'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie'
'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal'

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Old 02-09-2012, 04:16 PM   #7867
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All is well and fresh,
a gilded surface in space—
the end of the world.
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Old 02-09-2012, 04:19 PM   #7868
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the end of the world
who said and when is it so
the mayans was it?
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'read the writer, hear them sing!'
'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie'
'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal'

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Old 02-09-2012, 11:05 PM   #7869
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The Mayans? Was it
another crop circle clue?
Only time will tell.
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Old 02-10-2012, 12:17 AM   #7870
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Old 02-10-2012, 02:02 AM   #7871
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Outside her matrix,
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Old 02-10-2012, 02:42 PM   #7872
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it looked oppressed so it went
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'read the writer, hear them sing!'
'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie'
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Old 02-12-2012, 12:13 AM   #7873
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All the way to free,
well past the doors of iron,
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Old 02-12-2012, 12:41 AM   #7874
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Old 02-12-2012, 12:52 AM   #7875
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instead of their legs
they ramble on their loose rhymes
with an ape's embrace
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