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#7851 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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What we wanted shrunk;
disappointed was the look— there's a pill for that. |
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#7852 |
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IS just like you
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: louisiana suburbia
Posts: 304
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there's a pill for that--
when here is so easy. take this synthetic love |
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#7853 |
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Do not taunt Happy Fun Mod
AW Moderator
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: the everlasting universe of things
Posts: 3,606
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This synthetic love
Mediated by TV, Needs commercial breaks. |
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#7854 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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Needs? Commercial breaks
come in handy when you've had way too much bean dip. |
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#7856 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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Late to the party,
the last orange leaf circles -- small spark on the wind. |
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#7858 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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A blazing sunset,
Lebowskiing, white Russian -- no nihilists near. |
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#7859 |
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Learning to read more, post less
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: London, where the heart matters most
Posts: 848
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no nihilist near
just believers of great deeds beautiful is life
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''as I gaze onto the stars, a light blushes pass through the skies, and comes to rest somewhere up far''----katian 'read the writer, hear them sing!' 'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie' ![]() 'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal' ![]() 'the world must upgrade in mentality' |
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#7860 |
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IS just like you
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: louisiana suburbia
Posts: 304
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beautiful is life
green is grass, blue is sky, sin- -tense is inverted |
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#7861 |
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IS just like you
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: louisiana suburbia
Posts: 304
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beautiful is life
green is grass, blue is sky, sin- -tense is inverted |
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#7862 |
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Learning to read more, post less
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: London, where the heart matters most
Posts: 848
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tense is inverted
changes feel incredible better believe it
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''as I gaze onto the stars, a light blushes pass through the skies, and comes to rest somewhere up far''----katian 'read the writer, hear them sing!' 'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie' ![]() 'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal' ![]() 'the world must upgrade in mentality' |
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#7864 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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Before it drowns me,
some in this deluge of days rise to crisp, soft air. |
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#7865 |
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IS just like you
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: louisiana suburbia
Posts: 304
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rise to crisp, soft air
a morning piss melting frost fumes from truck's exhaust |
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#7866 |
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Learning to read more, post less
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: London, where the heart matters most
Posts: 848
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fume from truck's exhaust
dissipate and disappear all is well and fresh
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''as I gaze onto the stars, a light blushes pass through the skies, and comes to rest somewhere up far''----katian 'read the writer, hear them sing!' 'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie' ![]() 'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal' ![]() 'the world must upgrade in mentality' |
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#7867 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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All is well and fresh,
a gilded surface in space— the end of the world. |
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#7868 |
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Learning to read more, post less
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: London, where the heart matters most
Posts: 848
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the end of the world
who said and when is it so the mayans was it?
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''as I gaze onto the stars, a light blushes pass through the skies, and comes to rest somewhere up far''----katian 'read the writer, hear them sing!' 'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie' ![]() 'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal' ![]() 'the world must upgrade in mentality' |
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#7870 |
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><(((º>
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 36
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only time will tell
when she is dressed in april outside her matrix |
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#7871 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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Outside her matrix,
data points are merely fixed on different grids. |
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#7872 |
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Learning to read more, post less
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: London, where the heart matters most
Posts: 848
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on some different grids
it looked oppressed so it went all the way to free
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''as I gaze onto the stars, a light blushes pass through the skies, and comes to rest somewhere up far''----katian 'read the writer, hear them sing!' 'rien de perdu none de retrouve ainsi is la vie' ![]() 'an adjective can sustain an enormous deal over a word, call in the neutral for a dash of normal' ![]() 'the world must upgrade in mentality' |
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#7873 |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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All the way to free,
well past the doors of iron, many will stumble. |
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#7874 |
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
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Many will stumble
and question rogue gravities instead of their legs. |
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#7875 |
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Has a few recurring issues
AW Poet Laureate
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 4,907
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instead of their legs
they ramble on their loose rhymes with an ape's embrace
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Kieran Borsden "to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul" |
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