Read Books By AWers!

Welcome to the AbsoluteWrite Water Cooler! Please read The Newbie Guide To Absolute Write

editing for authors ad

A publisher or agency using Google ads to solicit your novel probably isn't anyone you want to write for.


Go Back   Absolute Write Water Cooler > General Writing Interest > Poetry
Register FAQ Calendar Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 10-02-2011, 10:36 PM   #7551
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
Your money's your own
prison when you can't see past
the cell of comfort.
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2011, 04:11 PM   #7552
Paul
Banned for Trolling
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Close to mother Sea
Posts: 4,504
Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
The cell of comfort
permeable and porous
clearly, not for us
Paul is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2011, 04:32 PM   #7553
pangalactic
Gargling blasters
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Manchester, UK
Posts: 721
pangalactic has a spectacular aura
Clearly not for us
those days of eternal wealth;
the well has run dry
__________________

http://www.chrisbissette.com
I'm writing a story a day for a year. Come say hello!

@pangalactic
pangalactic is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2011, 05:17 PM   #7554
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
The well has run dry --
imagination sand, grit
dirt in a dry mouth.
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2011, 09:22 PM   #7555
Paul
Banned for Trolling
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Close to mother Sea
Posts: 4,504
Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Dirt in a dry mouth
a forlorn child at the spout
of a rusted tap
Paul is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2011, 11:48 PM   #7556
B.D. Eyeslie
practical experience, FTW
 
B.D. Eyeslie's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2011
Location: The Vortex
Posts: 1,017
B.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolness
Of a rusted tap--
yet how sweet the maple sap
filling my bucket.
B.D. Eyeslie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-04-2011, 02:52 AM   #7557
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
Filling my bucket
with blackberries, if lucky,
takes me quite a while.
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 02:26 AM   #7558
Paul
Banned for Trolling
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Close to mother Sea
Posts: 4,504
Paul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsPaul is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
takes me quite a while
to while away the dying
day, let night begin
Paul is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 03:05 AM   #7559
L.J.
Liza Jane Doesn't Live Here Anymore
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Posts: 36,359
L.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsL.J. is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
day, let night begin
and lull to peaceful slumber
the world weary souls
L.J. is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 03:18 AM   #7560
zanzjan
Hark the hotdog soda olive grape!
AW Moderator
 
zanzjan's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Intercontinental
Posts: 5,698
zanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
The world-weary souls
Queue up at the old turnstyles,
Haunted by late trains.
zanzjan is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 03:33 AM   #7561
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
Haunted by late trains,
ears, heart, unblinkable eyes
gather more shadows.
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 06:11 AM   #7562
B.D. Eyeslie
practical experience, FTW
 
B.D. Eyeslie's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2011
Location: The Vortex
Posts: 1,017
B.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolness
Gather more shadows
and hold them over my head.
My skin is burning.
B.D. Eyeslie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 08:42 AM   #7563
zanzjan
Hark the hotdog soda olive grape!
AW Moderator
 
zanzjan's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Intercontinental
Posts: 5,698
zanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentszanzjan is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
My skin is burning!
Fire ants! Fire ants! Get them off!
Nasty li'l fuckers.
zanzjan is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 09:06 AM   #7564
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
Nasty Li'l Fuckers
would top all kids' Christmas lists --
Dolls for the Real World!
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-05-2011, 11:54 PM   #7565
B.D. Eyeslie
practical experience, FTW
 
B.D. Eyeslie's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2011
Location: The Vortex
Posts: 1,017
B.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolness
Dolls for the real world
deflate in the Ford's back seat--
a painful goodbye.
B.D. Eyeslie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-06-2011, 02:27 AM   #7566
CDSinex
Imagine something clever here.
 
CDSinex's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Willamette Valley, Oregon
Posts: 19,613
CDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentsCDSinex is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
A painful goodbye—
Not waiting for the first frost
taunting geese take wing
__________________
.
CDSinex is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 10-06-2011, 03:16 AM   #7567
Perscribo
Trioletist
 
Perscribo's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
Posts: 684
Perscribo has earned our admirationPerscribo has earned our admirationPerscribo has earned our admirationPerscribo has earned our admiration
Taunting geese take wing
honking oil-slick memories
and the human stain.
__________________
__________________


Jen
_________________________
Classic ePoetry for your Kindle
Perscribo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-06-2011, 03:31 AM   #7568
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
... and the human stain ...
there! That's the last accounting --
apocalypse done.
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-06-2011, 06:42 PM   #7569
B.D. Eyeslie
practical experience, FTW
 
B.D. Eyeslie's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2011
Location: The Vortex
Posts: 1,017
B.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolness
Apocalypse done?
Not quite so fast there, bright eyes,
Don't forget mole man.

Sorry, I didn't mean to start a Springfield thread.
B.D. Eyeslie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-06-2011, 06:47 PM   #7570
kborsden
Has a few recurring issues
 
kborsden's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
Posts: 5,240
kborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate complimentskborsden is so great that we've run out of appropriate compliments
Don't forget mole-man,
buried below the surface
because he chose to
__________________
Kieran Borsden
"to be born Welsh, is to be born--not with a silver spoon in your mouth, but with song in your heart, and poetry in your soul"



Got to write an Englyn or 2
kborsden is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-2011, 12:18 AM   #7571
B.D. Eyeslie
practical experience, FTW
 
B.D. Eyeslie's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2011
Location: The Vortex
Posts: 1,017
B.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolnessB.D. Eyeslie leaves trails of profuse coolness
Because he chose to
hide his face from the masses,
his alibi's gone.
B.D. Eyeslie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-08-2011, 06:46 AM   #7572
celestialwolf
Blood? Ha! No, that's red ink.
 
celestialwolf's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: East Point, GA
Posts: 167
celestialwolf has a spectacular aura
His alibi's gone.
Those who could help him are dead.
And soon he'll be too.
celestialwolf is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-08-2011, 09:38 AM   #7573
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
And soon he'll be too
whereas she once was almost;
they could never at.
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-08-2011, 10:22 AM   #7574
Perscribo
Trioletist
 
Perscribo's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
Posts: 684
Perscribo has earned our admirationPerscribo has earned our admirationPerscribo has earned our admirationPerscribo has earned our admiration
They could never at
once listen and choose to hear
indelicate words.
__________________
__________________


Jen
_________________________
Classic ePoetry for your Kindle
Perscribo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-08-2011, 10:55 AM   #7575
Blarg
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: 13th of never
Posts: 2,497
Blarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputationBlarg has a double-platinum reputation
Indelicate words
thrust their bows through the rough sea
onto smaller boats.
Blarg is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Custom Search

If this site is helpful to you,
Please consider a voluntary subscription to defray ongoing expenses.

Buy Scrivener 2 for Mac OS X (Regular Licence)


All times are GMT +4.5. The time now is 10:26 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.