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Old 09-14-2011, 10:45 PM   #7476
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A red dragonfly --
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Old 09-14-2011, 11:35 PM   #7477
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a point, and a rest,
contemplative counterpoint;
life is a balance
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Old 09-15-2011, 12:54 AM   #7478
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Life is a balance
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Old 09-15-2011, 01:48 AM   #7479
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Old 09-15-2011, 07:13 PM   #7480
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The party goes on
though the guests are not the same.
Who opened the door?
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Old 09-16-2011, 05:13 AM   #7481
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Who opened the door
and let in the fallen leaves?
More work for the broom.
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Old 09-16-2011, 06:28 AM   #7482
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more work for the broom:
your goodbyes trail out the door
love can be messy
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Old 09-16-2011, 05:46 PM   #7483
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love can be messy—
arrhythmia and heartbreak.
mend it back to whole.
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Old 09-16-2011, 11:51 PM   #7484
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Mend it back to whole—
A broken gate stuck open
can keep nothing in.
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Old 09-17-2011, 01:17 AM   #7485
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can keep nothing in,
the keeper of my secrets,
she blogs all day long.
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Old 09-17-2011, 06:25 AM   #7486
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Old 09-17-2011, 08:37 AM   #7487
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deadlines approaching
the story begs completion
the muse is sleeping
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Old 09-17-2011, 09:26 PM   #7488
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The Muse is sleeping,
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Old 09-18-2011, 12:20 AM   #7489
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Dreams of tortured words
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Old 09-18-2011, 04:37 AM   #7490
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This poem lies sleeping
between the matted layers--
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Old 09-18-2011, 09:50 AM   #7491
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my pile of laundry
hides tales of chaotic days
in collars and seams
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Old 09-18-2011, 07:23 PM   #7492
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Old 09-18-2011, 11:06 PM   #7493
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To be washed away--
sweet love swept me off my feet
like the Johnstown Flood.
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Old 09-19-2011, 01:18 AM   #7494
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Like the Johnstown Flood --
boards, glass, rocks in its waters --
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Old 09-19-2011, 01:59 AM   #7495
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your words have context
but mine float around empty
helpless in the wind
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Old 09-19-2011, 03:32 AM   #7496
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helpless in the wind
water drops onto parched land
power in the rain
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Old 09-19-2011, 03:33 AM   #7497
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Old 09-19-2011, 06:12 AM   #7498
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Quiet in the town,
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The trains running late.
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The trains running late,
time pulls its Mussolini
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Sharp on my patience,
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