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Old 05-17-2011, 08:45 AM   #6901
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Old 05-17-2011, 08:53 PM   #6902
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Old 05-18-2011, 12:09 AM   #6903
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Old 05-18-2011, 02:58 AM   #6904
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who can't change color
when push really comes to shove
what's the difference


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Old 05-18-2011, 03:26 AM   #6905
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what's the difference
between whip-fast and snail-slow
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Old 05-18-2011, 11:00 PM   #6906
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To a giant sloth,
The world is less mystery
Than discovery.

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Old 05-18-2011, 11:34 PM   #6907
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Old 05-19-2011, 01:09 AM   #6908
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It's shark week. Again.
Time to change my underwear.
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Old 05-19-2011, 05:56 PM   #6909
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Old 05-19-2011, 10:30 PM   #6910
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Sweet eau de toilet,
Reminder of undone chores.
I will get my brush.

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Old 05-19-2011, 11:21 PM   #6911
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I will get my brush
by the wind, and also my
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Old 05-20-2011, 05:35 AM   #6912
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silence in its palm
switch stations relentlessly
you have turned me off
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Old 05-20-2011, 07:54 PM   #6913
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you have turned me off

I want to kick the doors to
my mind open now
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Old 05-20-2011, 09:25 PM   #6914
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My mind open now
To the wide, limitless skies,
My dreams catch the clouds.

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Old 05-21-2011, 03:27 AM   #6915
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My dreams catch the clouds
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Old 05-21-2011, 04:13 AM   #6916
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Old 05-21-2011, 04:34 PM   #6917
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under searching hands
I find the feather you shed
my angel my love

under searching hands
the earth's rich soil is turned
Spanish coins revealed

under searching hands
a hidden clue discovered
you are found guilty

under searching hands
I tease out these last few words
then no more searching
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Old 05-22-2011, 08:31 AM   #6918
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You are found guilty,
Your con-man, fake prophet lies:
Rapture? What rapture?

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Old 05-23-2011, 03:47 AM   #6919
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raptor uses sharp talons
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Old 05-23-2011, 05:53 AM   #6920
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Puncturing an eye,
I say to myself, next time
Don't run with scissors.

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Old 05-23-2011, 05:58 AM   #6921
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Old 05-23-2011, 06:11 AM   #6922
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Staring at the sun,
its daughter's shadow glows blue
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Old 05-24-2011, 12:25 AM   #6923
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When I turn away,
There are still spots in my eyes.
Blind, for now, to you.

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Old 05-24-2011, 12:49 AM   #6924
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Blind, for now, to you,
three old mice juggle the tails
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a jail filled with withered skins
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