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Old 06-03-2010, 09:08 PM   #6226
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Old 06-04-2010, 07:52 AM   #6227
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Old 06-04-2010, 05:53 PM   #6228
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Old 06-04-2010, 11:53 PM   #6230
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footless sleepers in summer
babies that won't cry
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Old 06-05-2010, 04:02 AM   #6232
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Old 06-05-2010, 04:50 AM   #6233
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Let them flow freely
gush fully and run madly
only to stumble
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Old 06-05-2010, 05:44 AM   #6234
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Only to stumble
seven times, getting up eight.
The sages would smile.

Your line made me think of a Japanese proverb, which stresses the importance of perseverance.

七転び八起き (Nanakorobi Yaoki)

If you stumble seven times, get up eight.
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Old 06-05-2010, 05:13 PM   #6235
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Old 06-05-2010, 09:26 PM   #6236
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Loving without doubt
Mallards glide on Molly’s Pond --
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(Molly’s Pond is in Cabot, VT.)
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Old 06-05-2010, 10:18 PM   #6237
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Old 06-05-2010, 10:39 PM   #6238
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and a lifetime yet
yesterday's morning drizzle
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stamps nepotism til flat
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Old 06-07-2010, 08:45 AM   #6241
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Old 06-08-2010, 07:57 AM   #6242
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