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Old 04-06-2008, 03:50 AM   #4276
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and I'm blue today
from cold nights of missing you
I thaw in the sun

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Old 04-06-2008, 09:44 AM   #4277
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Old 04-09-2008, 12:53 AM   #4278
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Old 04-09-2008, 03:06 AM   #4279
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Old 04-09-2008, 04:22 AM   #4280
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Old 04-09-2008, 09:43 AM   #4281
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Old 04-09-2008, 11:14 PM   #4282
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Old 04-10-2008, 05:52 AM   #4283
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Old 04-13-2008, 10:19 AM   #4284
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Old 04-16-2008, 05:18 AM   #4285
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Old 04-17-2008, 12:53 AM   #4286
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Old 04-17-2008, 02:59 AM   #4287
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Old 04-17-2008, 05:24 AM   #4288
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Shake off your debris
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Old 04-18-2008, 08:08 AM   #4289
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Old 04-18-2008, 01:02 PM   #4290
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Old 04-19-2008, 03:59 AM   #4291
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Old 04-24-2008, 02:23 PM   #4292
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moaning your name, helps
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Old 04-25-2008, 12:28 AM   #4293
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Old 04-26-2008, 06:55 AM   #4295
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Old 04-26-2008, 07:29 AM   #4296
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