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Old 04-10-2006, 03:52 AM   #251
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Old 04-10-2006, 04:03 AM   #252
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passage to manhood
quench my thirst along the way
fall into my hand

fall into my hand
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Old 04-10-2006, 04:49 AM   #253
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heart of an iceberg
scrapes and splits the metal sheath
titanic struggle
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Old 04-10-2006, 05:51 AM   #254
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titanic struggle
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Old 04-10-2006, 06:32 AM   #255
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heart of an iceberg
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I rest my hand on
your face, why do we struggle?
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Old 04-10-2006, 06:33 AM   #256
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walk forever changed
i saw you with another
i'll find a new path
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Old 04-10-2006, 06:44 AM   #257
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Dovetailing

spring brings hurt feelings
i await summer, hopeful
for a warming fall

i'll find a new path
between hell and high water
for a warming fall
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Old 04-10-2006, 11:41 AM   #258
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for a warming fall
bonfire, congas, bare feet prance
earnest dance of hope
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Old 04-10-2006, 12:51 PM   #259
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earnest dance of hope
best travolta boogiesteps
so, your place or mine?
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Old 04-10-2006, 03:12 PM   #260
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so, your place or mine?
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Old 04-10-2006, 05:49 PM   #261
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Old 04-10-2006, 07:53 PM   #262
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Old 04-10-2006, 07:58 PM   #263
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back to the eighties

leg warmers, mousse, bare shoulders

break, flash, donít sit still
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Old 04-11-2006, 02:58 PM   #270
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