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Old 12-10-2012, 10:56 AM   #1
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I have a poem on Everyday Poets Dec. 10.

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Old 12-10-2012, 08:53 PM   #2
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Old 12-12-2012, 05:01 AM   #3
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Excellent poem.
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I am wowed. really wowed. excellent poem, it rolls through my mind as if on a Möbius strip. thank you for sharing.
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Old 12-14-2012, 02:26 AM   #5
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okay, Aftermath is so sharp, so good, so well turned, so incredibly wonderful, so gaga, so~ I love the form, I love your words that wash me into a new mind. I am scrubbed clean.
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in Time of the Year you do that thing, that yearning thing that makes me want. the color of her eyes...you hold your space, a world of want and you step back and watch. The tension is stunning and real. At least in my life it's real.
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