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Old 12-05-2012, 07:08 PM   #1
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Seeking beta for experimental magical realism

Dear board,

Book is narrated in pseudo-conversational style, features a bevy of complex plots and wild feats of magic; also a deranged shark god, and hordes of insane, mystically empowered Central American Freemasons. The story received high accolades from a number of agents, but nevertheless no bites. Please help.

My novel is 115,000 words long.

Thank you.

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Old 12-05-2012, 07:47 PM   #2
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If this is for the work quoted in your Sig, I'd stick a sample up in SYW - in fact, I'd do that anyway - so people can know what they are getting into.
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Old 12-05-2012, 07:50 PM   #3
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No, different story.
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Old 12-05-2012, 07:56 PM   #4
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I'm interested but as Theo81 says, better get an except up in SYW so we can have an idea before committing.
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Old 12-06-2012, 04:35 AM   #5
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Here's my suggestion to all potential beta readers: start with a sample. Beta reading is a serious commitment, especially a 80K+ word manuscript. Whenever I'm considering a project, I always start with 1-3 chapters or 30-50 pages before committing to the entire MS. It's pretty simple and so far, nobody has objected.

Not everyone wants to post their project in the Share Your Work forum (for a myriad of reasons) and I respect that. So, if you're interested in richcapo's project but are uncertain as to whether or not you want to commit to critiquing 115K words, consider asking him to share a partial with you so you can test the waters. This will also give richcapo an idea as to your ability to offer a constructive critique. After all, beta reading is a two-way street.
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Old 12-06-2012, 04:38 AM   #6
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Thanks, Rowan. I'd be happy to issue partials to any interested party.
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Thanks Rowan, this helps me too.

So, richcapo, interested in what he said?
Oh, I am looking for a swap, BTW. So we can swap samples if you like.
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Old 12-06-2012, 06:10 AM   #8
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I'll swap, sure. Partial or full works for me. Thanks.
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It was that bastard manís voice that woke my father. Papu found himself back in his cell, lying atop a lush bed crafted of various male and female organs and his enemy's passions. Strong with that bastard manís magic, the organs restrained Papu and sensually rubbed against him. Some xxxxxxx him and some xxxxxx with his xxxxxxx.

Poetry and Jest

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Old 12-06-2012, 03:35 PM   #9
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I fixed it for you.

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Thanks Rowan, this helps me too.

So, richcapo, interested in what she said?
Oh, I am looking for a swap, BTW. So we can swap samples if you like.
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I fixed it for you.
Of course you're a she -- you do wield the Witchblade after all.
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Old 12-06-2012, 11:57 PM   #11
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I fixed it for you.
Oh gosh! I'm sorry!
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