Looking for a beta/swap for MG 56K

Laura J · 12-05-2012, 01:06 AM

I'm looking for a beta/swap for my MG Magical Realism. It is around 56K words. I will read for you anything but horror (I spook easily). I like MG or YA.

I am still editing my WIP (2nd time), so the chapters would come in a few at a time. I'm editing, again, my mentor is reading and line editing and sending it back. I am re-editing and will send it to you, a chapter or two at a time.

Here is a link to the first chapter in SYW

Innerworks Chronicles Chapter One

I'm a somewhat new at beta reading and editing, but will work really hard for you also. I have a bit of time on my hands right now, so I can get a lot of reading done.

I'm looking for any suggestions, line edits, whatever help you can offer. I take criticisim well and am looking to learn.

This is sounding like a personal ad.

Thank you,

FionnJameson · 12-05-2012, 01:32 AM

Honestly? I'm captivated with your excerpt in SYW. I want to read more. If you'd like to swap with me, I'm currently on the second draft of my UF about a morally ambiguous pyromaniac demon hunter!

monkeymum · 12-05-2012, 05:08 PM

Hey Laura, I'd be happy to swap. I really need some fresh eyes on an MG 49k (2nd draft and SF/F I think...). It does have demons and ghosts, but I don't think it's particularly scary

gell214 · 12-05-2012, 07:41 PM

PMd you

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12-05-2012, 01:06 AM	#1
Laura J practical experience, FTW Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Tampa Posts: 419	Looking for a beta/swap for MG 56K I'm looking for a beta/swap for my MG Magical Realism. It is around 56K words. I will read for you anything but horror (I spook easily). I like MG or YA. I am still editing my WIP (2nd time), so the chapters would come in a few at a time. I'm editing, again, my mentor is reading and line editing and sending it back. I am re-editing and will send it to you, a chapter or two at a time. Here is a link to the first chapter in SYW Innerworks Chronicles Chapter One I'm a somewhat new at beta reading and editing, but will work really hard for you also. I have a bit of time on my hands right now, so I can get a lot of reading done. I'm looking for any suggestions, line edits, whatever help you can offer. I take criticisim well and am looking to learn. This is sounding like a personal ad. Thank you, __________________ Laura J Innerworks -- MG Magical Realism Revising- 59K- 9K cut out!! 50K The Faery Thief~editing and revising The Charisma Chronicles (working title) 3K Camp NaNoWriMo piece for April

12-05-2012, 01:32 AM	#2
FionnJameson I want a reverse harem... Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicahgoh Posts: 130	Honestly? I'm captivated with your excerpt in SYW. I want to read more. If you'd like to swap with me, I'm currently on the second draft of my UF about a morally ambiguous pyromaniac demon hunter! __________________

12-05-2012, 05:08 PM	#3
monkeymum practical experience, FTW Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Devon, UK Posts: 125	Hey Laura, I'd be happy to swap. I really need some fresh eyes on an MG 49k (2nd draft and SF/F I think...). It does have demons and ghosts, but I don't think it's particularly scary __________________ Time is an illusion. Lunchtime doubly so. - Ford Prefect, The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy

12-05-2012, 07:41 PM	#4
gell214 practical experience, FTW Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: In a hole carved by sweat and blood. Posts: 269	PMd you . __________________ Through your dreams, my sleeping children, you had a passenger and you never knew. -Neil Gaiman Le blog (under construction). Le g+. Le FaceBook. Le Twitter.

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