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Old 04-21-2012, 12:27 AM   #2701
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Old 04-21-2012, 12:31 AM   #2702
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Old 04-21-2012, 12:45 AM   #2704
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Old 04-21-2012, 12:52 AM   #2706
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:01 AM   #2707
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I'm great!

Now that I finally decided on a college to go to, I just have to sit back and wait for graduation day. How are you?
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:04 AM   #2708
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Hey, Lisa.

Yay for college decisions! How exciting

Is Para around? I have a synopsis question...
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:07 AM   #2709
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:14 AM   #2710
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:18 AM   #2711
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PARA!!

Can you look at the synopsis I need to submit for me?
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:21 AM   #2712
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How long is it? I'm pretty busy with deadlines atm.
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With a synopsis for a dual-POV novel, would it be better to focus on only one POV or both?
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:26 AM   #2715
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I'd be inclined to stick with the same one viewpoint for both the query and synopsis. Simple and clear. That's what I did for my dual-viewpoint urban fantasy. Although nobody is remotely interested in the urban fantasy, so I'd take my advice with a pinch of salt. I am truly a query genius.
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I did both...
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Sorry, I'm going to focus on hitting these deadlines. If you post it on the thread, maybe someone will have a spare moment.
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Old 04-21-2012, 01:37 AM   #2719
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HR - I know! I'm super excited about starting college in the Fall.
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I'm glad. College is awesome! I can't believe my first year is almost over already...
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OK. I'll do that tomorrow.
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Yikes. I feel old. It's nearly a year since I left university with my second degree, and you haven't even started yet.
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Many a year ago, yes.
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