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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Where opinions have a distinct aroma.
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...and how will we remember thee?
Without the things that remind us, there's no shortcake biscuits with tea— and how will we remember the apple pies, or fresh raspberry crumble that you'd make just for us? And how! Will we remember thee, without the things that remind us?
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
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Without, the things that remind us
smell. These rosemary plants arouse memories from within. We fuss without the things that remind us all about. We long to discuss our trees that blossom; barren boughs without the things that remind us. Smell these. Rosemary plants arouse. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
Posts: 7,718
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smell these rosemary plants, arouse
forgotten evenings on the summer porch; remember when in innocence, you looked within my blouse? smell - these rosemary plants arouse. Time has come, he planted, now he plows, for eighty years burns this torch; smell - these rosemary plants arouse forgotten evenings on the summer porch.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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Forgotten evenings on the summer porch,
spoken promises, rocking in the swing. Are the memories of the sheets we scorched forgotten? Evenings on the summer porch— a kiss, a prelude to love, then we torched the flames of passion on the old box spring. Forgotten! Evenings on the summer porch— broken promises rocking in the swing. When in doubt, make it about sex. Spoken to broken = poetic license |
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
Posts: 625
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Broken. Promises rocking in the swing
of this scale. Imbalance weighs on my mind like a beached whale: no chance I'd be seeing broken promises rocking! In the swing, I wore a pale sun dress with white stockings. You were in unison, until I find broken promises, rocking in the swing of this. Scale imbalance weighs on my mind. Last edited by Perscribo; 03-06-2012 at 06:58 AM. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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of this scale, imbalance weighs on my mind:
whether to love, though love has left my life, or simply lust, abandoning hope for love I'll never find; of this scale, imbalance weighs on my mind. just for sex, and nothing more, there's plenty of this kind, a deeper love seems to cause such strife; of this scale, imbalance weighs on my mind, whether to love, though love has left my life.
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
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Whether to love, though love has left my life,
I must decide. What the future unfolds is this query carved inside with a knife: whether to love. Though love has left, my life moves on as mom and friend--just not as wife. I must don this grin to get through the cold weather--to love though love has left my life. I must decide what the future unfolds. Last edited by Perscribo; 03-07-2012 at 10:02 AM. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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i must decide what the future unfolds
flinging wishes, like coins falling in a fountain; the wants, desires and hope-to-be's i told, i must decide what the future holds. in reckless abandon, youth is nothing short of bold; foolishly destorying the past i cursed to maintain, i must decide what the future unfolds; flinging wishes, like coins falling in a fountain.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 791
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Flinging wishes, like coins falling in a fountain,
may your dreams find firmer footing than mine. Singing witches stir at the crown of the mountain, flinging wishes. Like coins falling in a fountain, their deadly potions splash. Add a pinch of distain to the mix where I'm mashed with pitch of pine, flinging wishes like coins. Falling in a fountain, may your dreams find firmer footing than mine. I know, too many rhymes. I couldn't help myself. Last edited by B.D. Eyeslie; 03-13-2012 at 04:03 PM. |
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
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"May, your dreams find firmer footing than mine,"
passing through the garden a man observes. Flowers rooted in the hard ground design May. "Your dreams find. Firmer footing than mine forces me to follow, so I resign." His fond adieu: "Never-ending reserves may your dreams find; firmer footing than mine passing." Through the garden a man observes. Last edited by Perscribo; 03-13-2012 at 08:18 PM. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
Posts: 7,718
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passing: through a garden, a man observes,
as a flower fades, beauty becomes but a memory left alone, inspiration is lost to the praise it deserves; passing through a garden, a man observes with dimlit eye, the import of life often blurs; unattended, the sprig wilts from atrophy. passing through, a garden a man observes as a flower fades, beauty becomes but a memory
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Hmmmm...
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: USA
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As a flower fades, beauty becomes but a memory
to be renewed. With the help of a compound chemical injection stew, Nature is given new trajectories: as a flower fades, beauty becomes. But a memory of youth also induces my wife's supplementary purchases of products to make her skin delectable as a flower -- faded beauty becomes but a memory to be renewed with the help of a compound chemical. |
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One of the most important people in the world
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to be renewed with the help of a compound chemical,
the physical now but a facsimile, replication of a truth which seems comical to be renewed with the help of a compound chemical; plastic or paper, titanium or aluminum? Flesh, topical conversation we want to avoid; I ask, is it me? to be renewed with the help of a compound chemical, the physical now but a facsimile.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
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The physical now but a facsimile
of the future we hoped for together. Ethereal dreams we based on our symmetry— the physical. Now but a facsimile, our dance has become nothing but drudgery, an appointment to romp on bed feathers (the physical now). But ... a facsimile of the future we hoped for together? Last edited by B.D. Eyeslie; 03-15-2012 at 08:58 PM. |
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
Posts: 625
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Of the future we hoped for together,
the adventures I did not stop. To tell people we're doves, when it's just a feather of the future we hoped for together, you are certain to do. Downed by weather the days I'm with you does not speak well of the future. We hoped for, together, the adventures. I did not stop to tell. Last edited by Perscribo; 03-16-2012 at 12:13 AM. Reason: fixed meter |
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I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag.
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: Japan
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The adventures I did not stop to tell
They changed my life for the better So there was a time I lived in hell The adventures I did not stop to tell But I found the strength to help me excel I now live my life without fetter The adventures I did not stop to tell They changed my life for the better |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
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They changed my life for the better.
"Let her go if she so insists." It wasn't that dear John letter they changed; my life for the better turned when they showed me my debt or penance to pay for the long list they changed. My life, for the better, let her go if she so insists. |
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Hmmmm...
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: USA
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Let her go if she so insists
or else consequences will come through my fists. Anytime she resists, let her. Go if she so insists -- don’t look back, you can’t coexist, return to wherever you’re from. Let her go if she so insists, or else! Consequences will come… |
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I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag.
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: Japan
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Or else! Consequences will come
If you don't sit your butt down now And that equation solve somehow Or else! Consequences will come Enough! Get working on that easy sum Or you'll end up on a garbage scow Or else! Consequences will come If you don't sit your butt down now |
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
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If you don't sit your butt down now,
the teacher will do it for you. There'll be nothing that you're allowed if you don't sit your butt down now. You want to steal the plastic cow— the mascot for all that we do? If you don't sit your butt down now, the teacher will do it for you. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
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the teacher will do it for you
revealing a higher way, challenge your mind to think anew the teacher will do it for you; proud of all you knew, there was nothing left to convey; the teacher will do it for you revealing a higher way
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: May 2011
Location: Massachusetts
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Revealing a higher way,
signs point out the direction. The meaning of what they say— revealing—a higher way concealing misery's day. Suffer enough perfection, revealing a higher way, signs point out the direction. |
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sand piper
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: California
Posts: 625
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Signs point out; the direction
I should have taken from the start. I look over the rejection signs--point out the direction hope took with your inflection. Your scale did not match my chart signs. Point out the direction I should have taken from the start. |
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One of the most important people in the world
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: near to Dogwood Missouri
Posts: 7,718
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i should have taken from the start,
leaving nothing for you to waste; too late, you've trashed my heart i should have taken from the start; with mutual respect we could have part, rather than enemity; why such haste? i should have taken from the start, leaving nothing for you to waste.
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I got Kraken Treats, $1.50 a bag.
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: Japan
Posts: 1,149
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Leaving nothing for you to waste.
I ate all the cookies you made today They are much too good to give away Leaving nothing for you to waste. I should compliment you on how they taste But it's hard to type while I nom away Leaving nothing for you to waste, I ate all the cookies you made today |
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