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Old 09-19-2011, 06:03 AM   #14676
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Old 09-19-2011, 02:28 PM   #14680
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Hi, guys.

I want some Tipex before I continue plotting Underdogs, so for now I'm going to work on my Beauty and the Beast retelling, which I thought of a possible title for the other night: "Discoloured Rainbows". What do you guys think?
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Old 09-19-2011, 02:38 PM   #14681
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Old 09-19-2011, 02:40 PM   #14682
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OMG I have passed 8K posts! How did I not notice this. :O

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Old 09-19-2011, 08:25 PM   #14683
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Old 09-19-2011, 08:26 PM   #14684
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Old 09-19-2011, 08:52 PM   #14686
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Old 09-19-2011, 09:03 PM   #14688
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Old 09-19-2011, 09:05 PM   #14689
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LOL. Yes.

Is it too Glee-like?
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Old 09-19-2011, 09:31 PM   #14695
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Lisa, it seems a lot like glee.
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Old 09-19-2011, 09:35 PM   #14696
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I'm inclined to agree with Zoe.

That awkward moment when the time on the computer is earlier than the time on AW...

ETA: Tay, it may be because I know that it's inspired by HP, but now everything you post about your book makes me immediately think "okay, compare to HP, is it too similar?"

So both the MC dying and the MCs running around trying to prevent the bad guy's immortality is very HP-like to me. The problem I've been seeing, honestly, is that it keeps feeling like you're taking something from Harry Potter and saying "okay, how can I change this so it goes in my story", rather than coming up with ideas on your own (which I know you're really good at =) )

I may be wrong, but I'm the kind of person who sees all similarities between books and has issues with them XD Hence why I did not like TMI until Sebastian showed up.
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That is my problem.
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Lisa, here is what you need to read: http://hollylisle.com/how-to-legally...y-steal-ideas/ It basically addresses that issue perfectly.

ETA: Hi, BG!
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I wasn't intending to steal ideas... I did steal a name.
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