Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th - Page 1092

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 06:44 PM

Hi, guys.

I turned out I was doing the wroing thing! I have to bring in 1K from my story in on Friday.

How the hell am I supposed to pick a scene??

CharacterInWhite · 03-07-2012, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lisalulu09

Hi, guys.

I turned out I was doing the wroing thing! I have to bring in 1K from my story in on Friday.

How the hell am I supposed to pick a scene??

Print everything. Tack it to a wall. Pick up a dart. Close your eyes. Throw the dart.

Scene chosen.

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 06:47 PM

LOL.

Taylor_Writes · 03-07-2012, 07:08 PM

That sounds like a good idea

Trying to get at least halfway through The Two Towers today. Hopefully I'll finish by the weekend.

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 07:09 PM

Most of my scenes have loads of bad language and/or is crap.

Taylor_Writes · 03-07-2012, 07:18 PM

Oh.

Fix them up, then

amlptj · 03-07-2012, 07:19 PM

Happy Birthday again Karla! hows it feel to be 21?

I was in Disney World for my 21 last year, but still didnt feel any more special

amlptj · 03-07-2012, 07:22 PM

two days ago i figured out how to fix the ending of UZ!!!While in class no doubt. Although i'm trying to get my MC's hands only slightly dirty, and i'm worried there stepping in a little too much. I was intending this to be a domino effects were all the bully's take each other down with Sam and Alex only stepping in a little to push them in the right direction of each other. Anyone want to hear the take down plot and see if there stepping in too much???

Arianna Sterling · 03-07-2012, 07:24 PM

Yesterday I forgot how old I am for a minute. This happened:

Me: "I don't have my ID with me. I mean, I'm 18--"
Friend: "Aren't you 19?"
Me: "...Oh my god you're right."

ETA: Sure, Ally

Parametric · 03-07-2012, 07:25 PM

I often forget how old I am.

amlptj · 03-07-2012, 07:28 PM

I actually do that all the time! I'm almost 22 and i keep saying that i'm 20. Guess its just wishful thinking. Doesn't help that every time i go to the movies someone cards me, because they think i'm no older then 16.

When i was up at Will's brothers for the weekend we went to a bar for food, because his brother and friend were getting a beer sampler, we were all carded, he looked at me and Will's cards and was like "Well either you guys look really damn young for your age, or these are be best damn fake ID's I've ever seen." Had to ask his co-worker to look at our ID's because they couldn't believe we were 21. Funny part is we weren't even drinking!!!

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 07:32 PM

If I gave them the beginning, I could beep every time there is a bad word...

Arianna Sterling · 03-07-2012, 07:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lisalulu09

If I gave them the beginning, I could beep every time there is a bad word...

...Why? It's just swearing. We read stories with swearing and sex and worse in my creative writing class all the time.

Parametric · 03-07-2012, 07:40 PM

I very much doubt you know any words that could shock a class of university students.

KarlaErikaCal · 03-07-2012, 07:44 PM

Thanks, Ally!

How does it feel to be 21? No different than the day before haha. I never feel older unless I look at old pictures from at least 3 years ago and then I'm like whoa - I definitely aged lol

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 07:48 PM

Well, I have faggot in there....

Isaac uses it. I wouldn't use it.

amlptj · 03-07-2012, 07:57 PM

I have that word and much much worst in UZ. Sam pretty much isnt called anything else by his classmates in school.

Taylor_Writes · 03-07-2012, 07:59 PM

It's amazing how fast Kony 2012 is trending. I watched the video this morning, and decided to share it on Facebook because I thought nobody had probably heard about it here, and it turned out a few of my friends had already shared.

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 07:59 PM

I think I already know what I want to do for CampWrimo. O.o. "Sunshine Kisses" -- a contempary romance involving Nick and Hannah who meet on holiday...

That is all I know.

Horserider · 03-07-2012, 08:27 PM

I have trouble remembering how old I am, too. For some reason I keep thinking I'm 19 (I won't be for four more months).

Quote:

Originally Posted by Parametric

I very much doubt you know any words that could shock a class of university students.

^^ This.

Parametric · 03-07-2012, 08:30 PM

I'll be 24 this year. Scary.

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 08:32 PM

I'll be 20 in June.

Arianna Sterling · 03-07-2012, 08:42 PM

I won't turn 20 until the end of this year. Sometimes I feel young, then I find a bunch of kids who have no idea what a VCR or Gameboy is and say nevermind.

amlptj · 03-07-2012, 08:48 PM

wanna talk about old school. My friend Sean this week brought his Sega game gear, its like an ultra big version of a Game-boy color

lisalulu09 · 03-07-2012, 08:54 PM

We used to have a Dreamcast...

Ally, what's the website you go to for surnames?

03-07-2012, 06:44 PM	#27276
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	Hi, guys. I turned out I was doing the wroing thing! I have to bring in 1K from my story in on Friday. How the hell am I supposed to pick a scene?? __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

03-07-2012, 06:47 PM	#27278
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	LOL. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

03-07-2012, 07:09 PM	#27280
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	Most of my scenes have loads of bad language and/or is crap. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

03-07-2012, 07:19 PM	#27282
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	Happy Birthday again Karla! hows it feel to be 21? I was in Disney World for my 21 last year, but still didnt feel any more special __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

03-07-2012, 07:22 PM	#27283
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	two days ago i figured out how to fix the ending of UZ!!!While in class no doubt. Although i'm trying to get my MC's hands only slightly dirty, and i'm worried there stepping in a little too much. I was intending this to be a domino effects were all the bully's take each other down with Sam and Alex only stepping in a little to push them in the right direction of each other. Anyone want to hear the take down plot and see if there stepping in too much??? __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

03-07-2012, 07:08 PM	#27279
Taylor_Writes #teampeeta Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere Only We Know... Posts: 2,066	That sounds like a good idea Trying to get at least halfway through The Two Towers today. Hopefully I'll finish by the weekend.

03-07-2012, 07:18 PM	#27281
Taylor_Writes #teampeeta Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere Only We Know... Posts: 2,066	Oh. Fix them up, then

03-07-2012, 07:24 PM	#27284
Arianna Sterling My Protagonists Hate Me Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Cirque des Tenebres Posts: 6,981	Yesterday I forgot how old I am for a minute. This happened: Me: "I don't have my ID with me. I mean, I'm 18--" Friend: "Aren't you 19?" Me: "...Oh my god you're right." ETA: Sure, Ally __________________ Weeping (dark fantasy) In revisions Lifelike (fantasy) Drafting Oh, I also review books. Sometimes I mention zombies even though the books have nothing to do with zombies.

03-07-2012, 07:25 PM	#27285
Parametric useless idiot Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Bristol, England Posts: 9,085	I often forget how old I am.

03-07-2012, 07:28 PM	#27286
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	I actually do that all the time! I'm almost 22 and i keep saying that i'm 20. Guess its just wishful thinking. Doesn't help that every time i go to the movies someone cards me, because they think i'm no older then 16. When i was up at Will's brothers for the weekend we went to a bar for food, because his brother and friend were getting a beer sampler, we were all carded, he looked at me and Will's cards and was like "Well either you guys look really damn young for your age, or these are be best damn fake ID's I've ever seen." Had to ask his co-worker to look at our ID's because they couldn't believe we were 21. Funny part is we weren't even drinking!!! __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

03-07-2012, 07:32 PM	#27287
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	If I gave them the beginning, I could beep every time there is a bad word... __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

03-07-2012, 07:40 PM	#27289
Parametric useless idiot Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Bristol, England Posts: 9,085	I very much doubt you know any words that could shock a class of university students.

03-07-2012, 07:44 PM	#27290
KarlaErikaCal YA romance writer in love with love Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 12,480	Thanks, Ally! How does it feel to be 21? No different than the day before haha. I never feel older unless I look at old pictures from at least 3 years ago and then I'm like whoa - I definitely aged lol __________________ BLOG TWITTER FACEBOOK FAN PAGE GOODREADS WIPs: TATTOO LOVE - 14.8K

03-07-2012, 07:48 PM	#27291
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	Well, I have faggot in there.... Isaac uses it. I wouldn't use it. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

03-07-2012, 07:57 PM	#27292
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	I have that word and much much worst in UZ. Sam pretty much isnt called anything else by his classmates in school. __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

03-07-2012, 07:59 PM	#27293
Taylor_Writes #teampeeta Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Somewhere Only We Know... Posts: 2,066	It's amazing how fast Kony 2012 is trending. I watched the video this morning, and decided to share it on Facebook because I thought nobody had probably heard about it here, and it turned out a few of my friends had already shared.

03-07-2012, 07:59 PM	#27294
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	I think I already know what I want to do for CampWrimo. O.o. "Sunshine Kisses" -- a contempary romance involving Nick and Hannah who meet on holiday... That is all I know. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

03-07-2012, 08:30 PM	#27296
Parametric useless idiot Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Bristol, England Posts: 9,085	I'll be 24 this year. Scary.

03-07-2012, 08:32 PM	#27297
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	I'll be 20 in June. __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

03-07-2012, 08:42 PM	#27298
Arianna Sterling My Protagonists Hate Me Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Cirque des Tenebres Posts: 6,981	I won't turn 20 until the end of this year. Sometimes I feel young, then I find a bunch of kids who have no idea what a VCR or Gameboy is and say nevermind. __________________ Weeping (dark fantasy) In revisions Lifelike (fantasy) Drafting Oh, I also review books. Sometimes I mention zombies even though the books have nothing to do with zombies.

03-07-2012, 08:48 PM	#27299
amlptj Speling & grammer murderer, Sorrie! Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Philadelphia PA Posts: 10,272	wanna talk about old school. My friend Sean this week brought his Sega game gear, its like an ultra big version of a Game-boy color __________________ Legend of the Freaks YA Horror/Thriller Series 8 of 12 books complete WiP Re-write of first book FREAKs Unsung Zeros Psychological Thriller Rewrite -1/2 done On Hold The Amnesia Journey YA Fantasy RBSL Contemp/romantic comedy Legend of a Freak (Blog!)

03-07-2012, 08:54 PM	#27300
lisalulu09 Potterhead Gleek Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Hogwarts Posts: 14,596	We used to have a Dreamcast... Ally, what's the website you go to for surnames? __________________ Stupid Cupid - YA Romantic Comedy - Out in the world Ollie - MG Retelling of Oliver Twist -On hold Rome Forever After - YA Contemporary Romance - Writing the first draft (12K/24K) Reading: "Oliver Twist" - Charles Dickens "Tweet Heart" - Elizabeth Rudnick Facebook Blog Twitter

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