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Old 02-24-2012, 05:28 AM   #26376
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As should you be! I really want to get back to the query stage. Remember how suckish my query/writing was before? I think I've improved a lot! Time to redeem myself.

On an unrelated note, I re-self-published (don't ask) one of my short stories to Amazon. Thank gosh the reviews transferred, lol. I'm hoping people will actually buy this.


And now to watch The Office.

ETA: Yes! First sale! I'm now 30 cents richer! Haha.

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Old 02-24-2012, 08:41 AM   #26377
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Old 02-24-2012, 08:46 AM   #26378
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Congrats Tally! Even though I'm six hours late in the conversation...
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Old 02-24-2012, 05:43 PM   #26380
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Old 02-24-2012, 09:38 PM   #26382
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14k left to edit, then I'm ready to send out my fulls and all. Woot!
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Old 02-24-2012, 10:07 PM   #26383
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Hi, guys.
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Old 02-25-2012, 12:05 AM   #26384
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Hey, Lisa.

I'm less than a chapter and a half away from being done these MAAH edits.

Then I'll send off my full, which is exclusive for a week (it was a contest thing).

Anyone want to read these edits? not looking for a beta, that would be a bit depressing.
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Old 02-25-2012, 12:20 AM   #26385
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I'm outlining.

I'm hoping to finish January tonight.

ALSO, GOOD LUCK TALLY.
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Old 02-25-2012, 12:22 AM   #26386
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Only the epilogue left!
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Old 02-25-2012, 12:27 AM   #26387
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Ahhh the chapter where I went, "OH, IT'S FINISHED."

I wish I had time to read more diary format novels (read THE MOTH DIARIES for class) but I don't. I'm curious to know how often entries occur.
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Old 02-25-2012, 12:29 AM   #26388
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My favorite diary format novel was 'Dear Jo.' entries varied from twice a day to once in three months.

ETA: otherwise known as the chapter where you THINK it's over.

I love me my cliffhangers... when I'm the one who knows what's coming,
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Old 02-25-2012, 12:34 AM   #26389
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I was thinking: entries at least once a week, at least for this draft.
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Damn, I typed my eta too slowly! Stupid hairdresser chair!
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Hey, Ely!
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Hello!

I was literally just using your MAAH notes for reference as I edited. XD
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There is going to be an awkward scene with Daniel's mum in a shopping centre. I say no more.
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I'm just sitting here thinking about a possible torture scene in OWHH. I say no more.
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I'll just plain say no more.
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THAT IS BECAUSE YOU ARE A SILENT LURKING NINJA.
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Trying to find a game to play while I try and come up with more scenes. One with the ball knocking the blocks with a paddle.
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Tally - I know I'm late but congrats on the full requests!
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Thanks!

OKAY, WHO SHOULD I KILL (or NOT kill) NEXT?
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