When Approaching an agent with two authors to a book...

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Though it will be a little bit before I am ready to start querying, I've been wondering for a little while how to approach this situation.

I've been working on a YA dystopian novel (first of a two/three parter). The story stems from a one-on-one role-play campaign that my fiance and I ran during the summer, that I felt had potential as its own story.

My fiance was the world builder. He created the general plotline, most of the world, and the secondary characters. I played the actions of the main character, and the campaign revolved around that.

However, I have done all the actual writing of the story, as well as revisions and researching on editing information (though my fiance has a knack for pointing out good advice that I've missed, particularly in relation to plot holes).

When I go to begin querying, should I let the agent know from the begining that there is two of us involved? Or would it wait until there's been a nibble? Would my fiance be considered a co-author, or as writing with me?

I'm just curious how to approach this.
 

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Do you (and your fiancé) consider him to be a co-author? I have a couple friends I bounce ideas off and sometimes they feed me awesome ideas, but I don't consider them co-authors and they don't consider themselves co-authors, either. If you decide that yes, you want to query the project as co-authors, easy enough. Just sign both of your names on the query letter. Look at Lisa and Laura Roecker, authors of The Liar Society. They're sisters and co-authors and they didn't do anything different than a single author would.

On the other hand, you could just keep your fiancé as your sidekick who contributes ideas but isn't an official co-author. Your decision, really.
 

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First off, before you query anybody about anything, I would seriously write up a document that clearly spells out your fiance's role in this, what he expects, what you expect, and how the credits are to split. Get an intellectual property lawyer involved, if necessary, and make sure you've covered everything and both of you understand what's going on. Because if you don't, whatever becomes of the project down the road will not be what the other person agreed to (it becomes a success and your fiance suddenly demands 75% of the royalties vs. the original 45% you agreed on verbally, say) and may create a nightmare for anybody connected to the project.
 

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I second Ben - just because he's your fiancé, doesn't mean you shouldn't treat him like any other collaborator and get the details nailed down.

AFAIK you can assign copyright to whomever you wish. Terry Pratchett's wife Lyn has shared copyright on his books for many years, but her name doesn't appear on the cover because she doesn't do any of the writing. Perhaps an arrangement like this, suitably legalised, would fit the bill.