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Old 03-27-2011, 09:43 PM   #15926
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Old 03-27-2011, 09:48 PM   #15928
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:03 PM   #15929
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:09 PM   #15930
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15930. Hello Drachma and John! I thought we'd be at 16K by last night. Guess we better get hustlin', huh?
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:10 PM   #15931
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15931. Of course, I've not been around like I should be either.
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:12 PM   #15932
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:15 PM   #15933
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15933. Hmmm, it seems there should be a cool thing I could do with that number but I can't figure it out right now.
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:23 PM   #15934
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:29 PM   #15935
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15935. Other things?!? There's no such thing. *he types between doing other things*
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:38 PM   #15936
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15936.It's good to see you back.
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:39 PM   #15937
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15937 *wishes for other things I could be doing*
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:41 PM   #15938
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Old 03-27-2011, 10:42 PM   #15939
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15939. Okay, I got the meat of a scene written, now I need to find a way for the characters to exit.
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Old 03-27-2011, 11:15 PM   #15940
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15940 wouldn't be fair to anyone for me to crit with this sinus thing going on! When I get my brain back, look out! =)
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Old 03-27-2011, 11:22 PM   #15941
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15941. Aw, is Kelly a wee bit grumpy with sinus troubs? I better be nice. I might want some crits done soon.
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15942 Even with the meds, my head hurts just enough to make my own writing appear completely stupid and unimportant... so out of respect, I should stay away from anyone else's until this clears up!
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