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Old 01-16-2011, 10:35 PM   #3651
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Old 01-16-2011, 10:59 PM   #3655
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3369 We need a team to come in here and smack out a thousand quick!
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3670. I just jumped it by 300. Does that help
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3671 You're right though.
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3672 Getting a bunch of people to sit down and pump out a bunch of posts would help
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3673 Just posting the same idea in several posts looks silly
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3674 But then again, what's the rush? Let's just have fun and enjoy the (snail pace) ride.
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