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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Apr 2007
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CJ, you may still be a little sensitive. Nothing I said was directed at you, personally, in any way. I was just trying to encourage playground king (and all of us) to look at the books with analytical eyes, even when they aren't really to his taste.
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Not so new, really
Join Date: Jan 2007
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That doesn't mean I advocate avoiding it forever. I was speaking generally too. Really. Remember, you and others on AW told me when Gabriel didn't pan out, I was better off setting it aside and start something else, because every story I write will teach me something to make the next better. Don't you think "Reading Like Writers" has the same logistics? So I'm sorry if I came off rude again, Judy, everyone, but I'm really trying to be respectful, I swear it.
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practical experience, FTW
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No offense taken.
And it's all about what you need at a particular moment. Sometimes I'm just hungry for information: Show me how to write. I'll devour a whole bunch of kidlit books, studying them with magnifying glasses to see how they're put together. Other times, I just want to read. Find me a good story and get carried away by it. Then I'll look for a big, thick grown-up book because I know I'll never write anything like it. And sometimes I read just to see what everybody's talking about. Books like Twilight or The Underneath, books that aren't really my style/taste. I may or may not finish the book, but I read enough to see what all the hype is about. If reading like a writer is painful for you, then it's certainly a good idea to take a break from it. We don't learn well when we're depressed!
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carpe libri
Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: never in the here and now
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I'm reading Knightley Academy and it's keeping my attention so far, a good thing these days. It's an alterative history-type book, and it does acknowledge in a subtle way that there is the looming spector of writing a book about an orphan going to a special school. One of the chapters is titled The Boy who Passed.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Jun 2011
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So I went to my library and realized, oh yea, they'll have all the Percy Jackson books. So I just rented the rest of the series.
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practical experience, FTW
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Good heavens, where do you live? In my corner of the world, libraries are free. At least for now...
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Jun 2011
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Oh they were free. When I said rented I didn't mean like a Blockbuster or something where you pay for them haha.
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Training in a Taekwondo studio
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Vermont
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Hey guys...
Do you have any recommendations where the main character is between 8-12 yrs old? I'm asking because at the beginning of my WIP, my main character is 10 yrs old and he moves away from his home and quickly makes new friends. Then the story skips ahead 4 yrs and he's a teenager. Later on in the story, he thinks back to when he was 11-12 yrs old. Lets narrow it down: I have read Percy Jackson: The Lightning Thief and all 7 Harry Potter books. I guess fantasy/science fiction is one possible category. Has anyone read House of the Scorpion? That would be in that category. Another category would be action adventure books. Bye guys see you later |
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i luv you giant bear statue
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practical experience, FTW
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Reading the third book in the Last Apprentice series by Joseph Delaney (also known as the Spook's Apprentice). So many series (yeah, I'm looking at you, Skulduggery Pleasant) lose their steam after the first book, but so far he's done a good job of crafting each story so it stands well on its own. I really enjoy his characters.
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Has semi-colon and will use it!
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: Michigan
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Dragging through Charlie Bone and the Castle of Mirrors. Now I remember why I gave this series up a few years ago. Books are okay, as I've said before, but just too juvenille. I think even kids would find them so. I know several of you are big lovers of the CB series so I apologize. I am still reading and I'm hoping to actually finishe the entire series this time, because the story is interesting, but the development isn't there. Oh, well.
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practical experience, FTW
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I must admit, the Percy Jackson series definitely picks up in the third book. His writing is MUCH better and the quests and interactions with the god's are a lot more, I don't know, believable I guess? And doesn't seem like they were just placed there to advance the plot. I think it also has something to do with Percy getting older, maybe I can connect with the MC easier now?
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Join Date: Aug 2010
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I actually liked the first book more than the others (although I think I've only read the first three). |
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i luv you giant bear statue
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Join Date: May 2008
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I've been plowing through a thousand page adult novel (note to writers: 400K is too long!) but i took a break to read Darth Paper Strikes Back. So far I like it even more than the first, much higher stakes and more interesting conflict.
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Illinois
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practical experience, FTW
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Illinois
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practical experience, FTW
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I LOVED Percy Jackson. I'm rereading them here and there. I also just reread the Last Hero, and I'm looking forward to the next installment. Didn't much care for the Kane Chronicles though. It felt like he used his best funny bits writing Percy, and couldn't come up with anything fresh for the Kane Chronicles. I don't think the book was horrible, but didn't think it was great either.
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careful...you'll end up in my novel
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: St. Louis
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I'm reading The Girl Who Could Fly. I like the story's premise--sheltered farm kid with a just-outed special power is taken to a top-secret government facility that runs a school for kids with special powers. Shades of Charlie Bone (which I DO love, though y'all are entitled to your own opinions!) and Harry Potter, etc.
At the halfway point, I find myself reading in critique mode instead of being caught up in the story. My main complaints: (1) the MC is a hayseed caricature who randomly exclaims things like "Butter my butt and call me a biscuit!" There isn't enough personality development to pull that off. (2) The mean people have no motivation for their actions, so it's just random over-the-top cruelty (3) lots of telling and redundant combinations of showing and telling. (4) the writing is clumsy and full of cliches, and tries too hard to be clever. It's blurbed by Stephenie Meyer, who called it "the oddest/sweetest mix of Little House on the Prairie and X-Men." O-kaaaay. So far, I would call it "trying to be a cross between Savvy and The Mysterious Benedict Society but falling a little short".
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Join Date: Aug 2010
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I'm reading the second Emily Windsnap (mermaid) book. I've almost finished it, and I think I can safely say that, in my opinion, the second book is better than the first--which is very unusual for a series.
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Training in a Taekwondo studio
Join Date: Jun 2010
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I loved reading the 1st Percy Jacskon book. I like the way it was written from his point of view as a 12 yr old kid (but this was changed for the movie).
As I said above, I have a thing for fantasy or science fiction novels. |
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i luv you giant bear statue
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Darth Paper Strikes Back was awesome, much stronger than the first book, which was pretty rad itself.
Then I read The Grand Plan To Fix Everything, about a little Indian-American girl obsessed with Bollywood films and a certain Bollywood actress, who has to move with her folks to a tiny village in India. Many awesome Bollywood-style adventures ensued. Now reading Jac0b W0nderbar and the C0smic Space Kap0w. The protagonist is really super unlikeable for me, a pretty horrible and unrepentant kid (destroying school property, destroying mom's property, lying about misdeeds, gluing stuff to a teacher's butt, causing his mom despair). I guess it's supposed to be his major flaw, but it comes off as douchey rather than sympathetic or lovable. But once the kids leave Earth their adventures are highly amusing, so I'm sticking with it.
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Reads more than she writes.
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Re-reading Olive's Ocean.
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careful...you'll end up in my novel
Join Date: Jun 2010
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That's a good one.
I'm re-re-rereading Half Magic.
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Guinea pig in the laboratory of God
Join Date: Jun 2007
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I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Half Magic!
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Reads more than she writes.
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I've never read Half Magic!
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