Teens Writing for Teens, the 5th

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MAAH is AWESOME.

Changed my avvie. I never knew Matthew Lewis had such PRETTY eyes. :D

Now back to writing before I start getting a crush on him.
 

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Well... where are you now? I'm going to do another round of edits before the summer's up, because it's been like, six months since I last did and my brain is still developing so my outlook has changed, and I'd really like to get in your feedback since I really respect your opinions.

And thanks!
 

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The last thing I remember reading was when they were going around talking to people as part of the investigation, and I think they'd finished talking to the parents of one of the girls. I'll add it to my list of things that absolutely must be fit into my schedule so I can finish it :)
 

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Thanks, Ari!

And Lisa-- doesn't Dianna (who plays Quinn) look absolutely stunning in my new avvie? Beautiful girl is beautiful. That is all.

If I ever meet her, I am so getting beauty tips.
 

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I did not recognise her. She and Lea look so different from the characters! And yes, she is stunning.

Also, I have one more episode of Season 1 to watch, and then I'm going to start Season 2.
 

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:D

Debating whether or not to finish this section on this scene I've nearly finished, or include the next one (I already know what's going to happen in it).
 

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The change has been made!

If you know what's going to happen, my vote goes to including it.

ETA: Sometimes I forget how much I love Josh Groban. Then I listen to him again.
 

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Okay, naming my new characters:

Elena or Elaina?

Dani or Demi?

Raphaelle or Rhiannon?

Madge or Maya?

Savannah or Syerra?
 

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*Dies laughing at Ari's avvie*

If it wasn't connected to the scene I'm about to write, I'd give it its own section, but as it is - character wise, I will. Thanks for the thoughts.

Now for at least an hour's more writing and then bed.
 

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Also, when I finish this section, hopefully that'll be Chapter 11 finished. But we shall see.

And yes, Cold-emort is GREATNESS IN A BOTTLE. ;D

ETA: My avvie is doing nothing for my productiveness. I feel this need to zone in and focus on the prettiness that is Matthew's eyes.
 

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So...

Demi is the new kid who gets totally caught up in the bullying and power plays of Elaina's rule within the school, Elaina is in love with Raphaelle, Raphaelle gets kidnapped by a political enemy of her father, Demi, who used to be a secret agent before retiring/running away, pulls together a mad plan to get Raphaelle back, somehow Demi and Elaina get together, and then Demi is accepted into their clique.

Wow. That is kind of wack.

ETA: Or, Lisa, you need to turn off your internet. Does wonders.
 

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I may switch the internet off if this carries on. However, this is quite an interesting scene so I may ignore you guys completely for a while. :')
 
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