For very short periods of time (eg seconds) I used heartbeats or breathes for the POV character
waylander Who's going for a beer? Super Member Registered Joined Oct 24, 2005 Messages 8,333 Reaction score 1,583 Age 65 Location London, UK Mar 4, 2010 #26 For very short periods of time (eg seconds) I used heartbeats or breathes for the POV character
euclid Where did I put me specs? Super Member Registered Joined Jul 13, 2008 Messages 1,964 Reaction score 229 Location Paradise Website www.jjtoner.com Mar 4, 2010 #27 waylander said: For very short periods of time (eg seconds) I used heartbeats or breathes for the POV character Click to expand... Good idea. I use "moments". Shouldn't that be "breaths"?
waylander said: For very short periods of time (eg seconds) I used heartbeats or breathes for the POV character Click to expand... Good idea. I use "moments". Shouldn't that be "breaths"?
Deb Kinnard Banned Flounced Joined Apr 28, 2008 Messages 2,382 Reaction score 311 Location Casa Chaos Website www.debkinnard.com Mar 4, 2010 #28 euclid said: Steady on, girl. I'm not THAT old! Click to expand... Gaah! I meant, of course, the setting of your NOVEL. LOL. I'M the one who's two years older than dirt.
euclid said: Steady on, girl. I'm not THAT old! Click to expand... Gaah! I meant, of course, the setting of your NOVEL. LOL. I'M the one who's two years older than dirt.