I'm not sure if I'm doing this right, so bear with me. I have a 4,800 word dark fantasy I could use some eyes on. I've edited and reedited it hundreds of times, and now I think I'm just shifting things around without actually improving it. It's very light on violence and gore, focused more on the psychological effects of fear on the protagonist. It's set in a post apocalyptic world, some two-hundred years in the future. And I'm looking for complete criticisms up to and including "scrap it and start anew." Would love if you even would want to read small sections of 1000 or less words! PM me if interested!
Also, I tried reading some of the short stories others have posted and it says it needs a special password. Am I too new or do I need to register somehow to get into the club? Thanks in advance!