quick question...

jazziz1

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Help, please! I could use an outside opinion...I've been staring at this draft for too long and am losing focus. I should know this, but my brain has turned to mush.

Would you say:

Jim has logged 18 years experience as a credit analyst and loan officer.

or

Jim has logged 18 years OF experience as a credit analyst and loan officer.


TIA!
 

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I'd go with the second one.
 

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I would say . . .

Jim has eighteen years of experience as a credit analyst and loan officer.