It's the first in a series, I'm looking for a fairly close critique this time since the draft after this round will most likely be the final. The book is divided into three parts, so I'd like send them one at a time. But if you'd prefer the entire thing, that's fine too.
Story is about Elodie, a 17 year old girl who seeks out and feeds on the negative emotions of other people to stay alive. Her mother gets kidnapped and she has to sort through a bunch of supernatural drama in order to find her.
You can read some here and here
message me or reply here. I'll send it out after the weekend, probably monday night.
Story is about Elodie, a 17 year old girl who seeks out and feeds on the negative emotions of other people to stay alive. Her mother gets kidnapped and she has to sort through a bunch of supernatural drama in order to find her.
You can read some here and here
message me or reply here. I'll send it out after the weekend, probably monday night.