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You know, I've noticed that particular word is extremely limited in MG. I spotted it once in a novel the other day and I was a bit surprised. It seems like you can get away with one, especially in upper MG. but as it's a direct stand in for the real f-word, you have to be sparing I think.
One of my fourth grade pals has coined an even more audacious alternative, "What the fart?" And I can't decide if it's more or less appropriate.
Yep, I think you're right. Just the fact it's a stand in makes it tricky.
I'll find something different. It's invariably true that when I highlight a word or phrase and keep coming back to it and don't feel comfortable, it needs to go.
It's hard, though, writing dialogue for a 12 yo boy MC and keeping the language clean enough for lower MG.
Thanks!