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Need a pair of fresh eyes for YA romance I'm subbing.

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YAreaderwriter

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Hello!

I am wondering if someone would be interested in reading my YA romance (~70k) I am submitting to agents. I've revised the query like ten times and fumbled with the first couple chapters just as much.

Feeling a little discourage, so I thought I need a pair of fresh eyes to read it!

I am also willing to swap (any kind of romance) and perhaps go on from their if you want a writing buddy/advice of any sort.

Thanks so much for looking! PM me or reply. I can send you the summary as well :)
 

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I also write romance (contemporary) and would consider giving yours a look. I also had a lot of form rejections when I queried at first. After a lot of revision, I found an agent who requested the full manuscript. I'm awaiting a response and don't quite know what to do with myself! Would you like me to look at your query and give it a critique or perhaps help you edit it and then move onto the manuscript itself? If so, pm me and I'll give you my e-mail.
Just so you know, I have worked with a critique partner in depth in the past and it worked out very well.
 
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