My writing is a steaming pile of pigeon poop.
I'm a little down. I got a lot of encouraging feedback from the participants at WriteOnCon for my Minion School story, which was nice. But I was hoping for some agently feedback - on the boards, during the pitch sessions - I got nada.
I think I let my hopes soar a little too high with my Minion School story, so the crash down to reality has hurt a lot more.
Okay. Pity party over. I have gotten one glimmer of hope - an agent who loved my idea. The writing, not so much. She said my voice "seems to be trying too hard and comes across as a bit unauthentic or un-relatable." She read the first three chapters. She'll take another look if I rewrite.
So, my tribe of helpful buddies- how would you approach said critique of your work? I wish she had given examples or been more specific. She said she'd look at it again if I did a rewrite, but do I start over with an aim to make it relatable and authentic? Any book suggestions on first person MG voice to help me out?
I'm a little down. I got a lot of encouraging feedback from the participants at WriteOnCon for my Minion School story, which was nice. But I was hoping for some agently feedback - on the boards, during the pitch sessions - I got nada.
I think I let my hopes soar a little too high with my Minion School story, so the crash down to reality has hurt a lot more.
Okay. Pity party over. I have gotten one glimmer of hope - an agent who loved my idea. The writing, not so much. She said my voice "seems to be trying too hard and comes across as a bit unauthentic or un-relatable." She read the first three chapters. She'll take another look if I rewrite.
So, my tribe of helpful buddies- how would you approach said critique of your work? I wish she had given examples or been more specific. She said she'd look at it again if I did a rewrite, but do I start over with an aim to make it relatable and authentic? Any book suggestions on first person MG voice to help me out?
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