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a beta told me to avoid using verbs look, hear, see.
he raised his head, a lean outline of a man stood before him
vs
he saw a lean man before him.
he was solving the math problems when he heard a loud bang from the window
vs
he was solving the math problems when a loud bang attacked from the window, invaded his peace and coerced him to look outside.
should one avoid verbs like look, see, hear, smell. Also what are filter verbs and why must one avoid them?
he raised his head, a lean outline of a man stood before him
vs
he saw a lean man before him.
he was solving the math problems when he heard a loud bang from the window
vs
he was solving the math problems when a loud bang attacked from the window, invaded his peace and coerced him to look outside.
should one avoid verbs like look, see, hear, smell. Also what are filter verbs and why must one avoid them?