Hey,
I still need some fresh eyes for 4,700-word paranormal investigation set in Malaysia. It's part horror, too. I've already had two great crits, but I need one or two more to help balance things out.
If you're interested, go ahead and PM me. I'll be happy to return the favor.
I have a 4,000-word sci-fi/fantasy I could use a few beta readers on. I'm specifically looking for a critique of the story itself, and how it can be improved, but any and all comments will be appreciated. PM me if interested. It has elves in space, if that helps clarify the type of sci-fi/fantasy involved.
Thanks Alex! Email sent.Sold! -- I'll read about elves in space. E-mail me a copy to: kingsgames at gmail dot com
Looking for some eyes on a 4.7K sci-fi with cops, criminals and time travel. (Defcon, if you're still looking for your story, I'd be open for a swap).
I want! Thank you sir! PM me your email, if you please.I'd be happy to take a look at it, if you want!
It's already been subbed, but thank you.Looking for some eyes on a 4.7K sci-fi with cops, criminals and time travel. (Defcon, if you're still looking for betas for your story, I'd be open for a swap).
I'm open, though I should warn you I don't read or write literature. If that's a problem, I understand.I do have a literary noir (no SFF elements) that needs some extra eyes if you'd be interested. It's 3,900 words. Or anyone else who wants to take a peek. I think it's a fun piece.
If no one has offered, you can send it my way. I may take a few days (trying to get through some other reading and beta another story), but it'll be done.Need some beta critter eyes on a 5,000 word sci-fi/fantasy, involving humans, elves, orcs, space, and psychological horror. It's a genre bender, with violence, possibly not for the faint of heart.
Help is definitely needed and appreciated. I've been working and reworking this story since January 19th (see initial post on that date). I think... I THINK I finally accomplished what I was looking for. It needs a touch up to strengthen and improve the prose, but I'm mostly interested in whether the story works.
I'll check it out, if you still need it.Need some fresh eyeballs for a 2,800-word humor-horror/weird tale. Any takers? I'll happily return the favor.
I do need it since no one has offered yet. It seems the betas are rather scant, aren't they?I'll check it out, if you still need it.
Yeah, I noticed fewer and fewer posts in this thread recently. AND missing "faces." You have my email, I presume? Send it on over! I have a semi-busy weekend, but I believe I'll be able to finish it as soon as tomorrow evening, or Sunday evening at the latest.I do need it since no one has offered yet. It seems the betas are rather scant, aren't they?
Yeah, I noticed fewer and fewer posts in this thread recently. AND missing "faces."