will need editing! no need to cry. Unless you're just in the mood for crying, which I would be after so many house guests!
I lurrrve my house-guests I just get depressed by how slowwwly
I write!
heyjude, if your MC is running in heels, she will regret it when she is 45. You might want an epilogue with a orthopedic lecture.
heyjude, if your MC is running in heels, she will regret it when she is 45. You might want an epilogue with a orthopedic lecture.
Actually, I'm rethinking the running. My MC isn't the type to run. ::sigh:: Someone send me the internal kindly granny again.
I put a few more words on paper and ended up with 515 for the day, but it looks like I'll tear some of that out to have her stand her ground.
Let me go and write a sentence without adjectives, she said grimly.
oh heyjude, I didn't mean to discourage you! Look, there is something heroic, absurd, sexy, determined, fabulous even, about a woman who has to run in stilettos over rough terrain -- in the dark? with potholes? -- leaping and teetering her way to freedom.
But women frolicking or fleeing in high heels end up in later years hobbling around in orthopedic sandals with hot water bottles strapped to their lower backs. Ask me about it.
Let me go and write a sentence without adjectives, she said grimly.
But women frolicking or fleeing in high heels end up in later years hobbling around in orthopedic sandals with hot water bottles strapped to their lower backs. Ask me about it.
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