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ETA: Dangit, caught again by my own failure to refresh!

Try this one instead:

And self-conscious grins
Give away those secrets
You hide with silence.

-Suzanne
 
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that sings within you
lyrical melodies beat
universal tunes.
 

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Universal tunes:
Wind playing on forest leaves,
Rain's steady drumbeat.

-Suzanne
 

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Rain's steady drumbeat
Four on the floor four four time
Fans want autographs
 

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What do writers want?
Characters that will behave,
Plots that aren't dumb.

-Suzanne
 

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From thoughts that don't come,
I find meaning in nothing --
The zen of absence.

-Suzanne
 

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Confuses people,
But I can't resist; I love
That semicolon.

-Suzanne
 

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Stumbling to its rest,
The acorn has decided.
Here I'll be a tree.

-Suzanne