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Haven't beta'd for a spell, but what the hey.

Style: I tend to look out for big picture things, especially characterization and story. I'll point out some little details if they jar me out of the story and will do the same with grammar and such. I give chapter-by-chapter critiques, though I will use line-by-line if it's needed.

Genres: All types of fantasy (high, urban, whathaveyou), YA and some romance. Will only look at completed works.

Availability: Not available.

Annnnd, that's it. Feel free to PM me with any questions. :)
 
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EDIT: Full up for the moment. I cannot take anyone else for a while.

I am willing to take on a few beta projects. I'll read just about anything, though I don't normally read adult romance, YA or Christian literature. I prefer fiction, historical fiction and fantasy, but have some experience with horror.

I'll mostly look at characterization, watch for plot holes and generally help eliminate awkwardness. I can do some grammar and spelling, if its blatant, but that's far from my strong point. I will try to get back to you within a few weeks, but I am fairly busy and have my own writing.
 
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Preferences (strongest to weakest):
-Young Adult (and its numerous subgenres)
-Mystery
-Horror (Warning: I am picky about stuff that tries to sell itself as horror but does not horrify me)
-Speculative Fiction as long as it challenges a preconceived notion or makes me think.
-Romance/Erotica (plot relevant sex please)
-Paranormal that limits itself to few supernatural critters (too many tends to bog down the narrative).

Will Not Read:
-Incomplete manuscripts. I'm a beta reader. I work with full drafts.
-Pro-religion fiction.
-Fantasy of the Tolkein or Vampire/Werewolf variety.
-"Literary" Fiction.
-Anything that was influenced by Joyce.
-Anything that uses purple prose and isn't being ironic about it.

Uncomfortable With: Almost nothing. In other words, if you need a gritty beta-reader who will not be immediately repulsed by some brutal material, I can probably stomach it.

Critique Style: I'm more of a story editor than a grammar hawk. I will comment on a line if its delivery is especially cliche or jarring, but for the most part I prefer to focus on broader strokes: world building, characterization, pacing, tension, suspension of disbelief, things like that. I tend to pair every critique I can with a compliment in an attempt to maximize effectiveness:encouragement ratios.

What I Write: Almost all of my current material is YA-Mystery told by a disenfranchised and overly snarky narrator. If that describes your book, odds are I will like it.

What I Want in Return: Eventually I will need to recruit beta readers of my own. Naturally I would like to resume those beta reader relationships that worked well from previous endeavours.

A spot in the acknowledgements never hurts either ;)

Conditions: I will grow impatient and frustrated if your grasp on the English language is not competent at the very least. Your MS should be void of elementary errors. It doesn't have to be perfect (if my copy editor has anything to prove, it's that mine aren't), but don't send me NaNo slog either. You should be fairly confident in what you have to share, and I will respond honestly to what you send.

Active members in the AW community are more likely to gain my readership than inactive ones. I cannot trust that a person with 1 post will not disappear after I've given them feedback, when I may call on them in the future to return the favour.

How to Contact Me: Treat me like a warm-up round for contacting an agent. Send me a PM with a pitch along with details (MS length, genre, how you take your coffee) and a small reading sample. If I like it, I'll ask for the first chapter (or prologue if you prefer) and send it back to you to either seal the deal or break it off.

If you agree to offer it, expect me to read "about" 30k words/week. If I finish sooner, take it as a compliment, because it meant I voraciously consumed your MS faster than Katniss ate her meal at the champion's table. If I finish later, I may just be busy. If the pacing is killing me and I don't want to finish the MS, I'll just tell you, along with a detailed feedback report of where things went down hill for me.
I just read your profile again. You're killing me. I sent you a message. . .I hope you'll read my work.

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Availability: AVAILABLE UNAVAILABLE

Once I'm finished with the projects I took on, I'll become available again.

Stories Must Be Completed(but they don't have to be perfect).

Preferences: PNR (paranomral romance - I'm lukewarm towards vampire stuff), horror/suspense/thriller/fantasy romance, erotica, horror/fantasy/paranomral/romance YA, and zombie anything.

Not Interested In: non-fiction, Christian, historical fiction, heavy sci-fi (not a huge post-apocalyptic or dystopian fan -- in less it involves zombies), Twilight-esque anything, I'm not a big fan of vampire stuff right now in less its done in an original sort of way.

Critique Style: line by line or one long critique per chapter. It depends on how quickly you want it back. Obviously, line by line takes longer.

Critique Focus: I'm not obsessive with grammar, if you have a blatant mistake (grammar or typos) I'll point it out but if you're looking for a proofreader I'm not your gal. I focus mostly on helping you show us things instead of telling, point out what's unneeded, critique the plot, characters and their development (if needed), and overall picture.

Time Frame: Depends on your story length and what you want. As of now, I have a good amount of free time of my hands.

PM me if you're interested. Include a summary of your story and word count. If you have shared any of your work in the SYW area then send me a link to that, too. I really recommend you sharing at least your opening in the SYW area so that you get as many opinions as possible on the strength of keeping a readers attention. If the summary is of interest to me then I'll ask for your first chapter. If the first chapter has potential/hocks me I'll ask for more.
 
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offering betareader services

I would be interested in acting as a betareader for somoene. I have a fair amount of time on my hands and can turn around work in a short space of time. The only thing I ask is that you are honest with your expectations from a betareader and accept that you might not like everything you get back from me. Prefer fantasy as a genre but happy to consider anything.

Happy writing.

Gray
 

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I'd like to help out with some beta reading. I have a pretty good eye for grammar and spelling and can usually see a plot hole if it's there.

I don't have a ton of free time, so it might be smarter to send me a smaller sample at first, 50 pages or so, and let me go over that first. Hopefully I could give you some decent feedback within a week or so.

Most genres would be ok. I like fantasy and sci-fi stuff, but I read everything if the characters are interesting. I'm probably not your guy for romance, as I've never really read a modern romance novel.

I don't need anything in return, except for a thank you. If you'd like to beta something for me at some point, just mention it as I will be seeking betas.

PM me if you want my help. I'll probably start out doing them one at a time, just so that I don't make promises I can't keep.
 

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Damn, heavy workload come in. Unavailable.

Would like to briefly re-open my beta reading purely for one or two m/m romance works.

I have a particular love for sci-fi and dark romance, but, to be honest, I'm pretty much open to anything m/m.

Pm blurb (I'm just seeing if it takes my fancy as a reader, so I don't want a synopsis), and let me know what you need.

But I like to start off small: short stories, or first chapter to begin with.

(I proof m/m with a publishing company and everything has to fit into a particular reading slot, so small and regular (chapter by chapter) would be ideal.)
 
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I would be interested in acting as a betareader for somoene. I have a fair amount of time on my hands and can turn around work in a short space of time. The only thing I ask is that you are honest with your expectations from a betareader and accept that you might not like everything you get back from me. Prefer fantasy as a genre but happy to consider anything.

Happy writing.

Gray
Graham Austin--
Would you be willing to beta a novella, it is a paranormal story set in the early 70s?
Let me know.

Thanks
Danyel
 

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New to Site-- Looking for Beta Readers and will reciprocate

I currently write Paranormal Romance/ UrbanFantasy novels. I have one complete novella called Sex, Drugs and Vampires? I also have a few other works in progress but I need beta readers for my novella.

I will read just about anything. Send me a message.

All types of Beta readers are welcome-- Harsh, truthful, kind, grammer police-- I really just want my piece to be the best it can be.

Wishing you all well.

Danyel
 

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Beta reading

Available

Preferences:

  • Fantasy (all types)
  • Sci-fi
  • Literary fiction
  • Screen plays in above genres

Conditions:

  • PM me with a query and the first 1000-2000 words or your first chapter.
  • I will do first 50 page (or 3 chapter) and complete novel.
  • If your story doesn't work for me, for genre, time, or grammatical reasons, I'll let you know.

Critique style: I like track changes, but I can write in your document, if that's what you prefer. I will keep a separate page of notes focusing on broader issues within the story, and I leave these type of things out of the line-by-line edits.

Experience: I've been a beta for several years, just not on this forum. I have an English minor with a focus in rhetoric. In addition, I have a B.S. (bachelor's of science).

Time Frame: I can respond within a week and let you know if I can take your project. I have a crit group, so I'm not looking for a time commitment from you for my manuscripts. I prefer completed projects or manuscripts near completion. If I can tell you don't grasp grammar and syntax, I'm probably going to ask you to put more time and effort into that before sending your manuscript out to a beta again.
 

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Hi! I will read anything except Horror, Scripts, and Christan Lit. Just PM me and I will respond in 24 hours unless something drastic has happened. I will edit in whichever style is most comfortable for you, though I prefer line-by-line. I look forward to hearing from you :)
 

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I'll read anything but erotica, religious lit and non-fiction. Nothing against those genres, I just don't enjoy them.
 

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I'm available to beta Cozy Mysteries, Historical Mysteries and Supernatural.

I read fast, and can give you the big picture cohesion, and can also be picky about language (though I will not edit line-by-line because of time constraints). I stay away from gore, gratuitous violence, erotica, child/animal abuse - so please don't ask me to read these. Strong language, if warranted in a scene, may be okay.

If your books are set in India, deal with Hinduism/Buddhism - I can understand that aspect. My background is urban planning/landscape architecture/watershed restoration - perhaps not too many fiction books dealing with this aspect, but just in case yours does - know that I'll be able to read and understand :)

Please pm me with a synopsis and first chapter, and any specific areas/issues that you want looked at. I work full-time, travel for work and am a mommy, but will get back to you within a couple of days regarding availability (variable at times, depending on work/home conditions).

Good luck!
 
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UPDATE: I am no longer available, as I have just agreed to beta-read for three authors.


Hello, I just finished Beta-Reading for a fellow AW member, so I am AVAILABLE.

Full Manuscripts are welcome.

I will read YA only (Paranormal romance, chick-lit, urban fantasy, dystopian.) Gore and violence are acceptable. However, I do not accept anything with erotic content or profuse swearing.

I can do line-by-line commentaries if time permits.

PM me with a synopsis of your work, and we'll correspond.

Thanks!
 
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I've been away for quite some time and am coming back to the world of novel-writing. I'm a little bit rusty with writing, myself, but I'm great at critiquing.

YA only, but no horror. Edgy is okay.

I am a teen writing for teens. I've queried two novels and am starting another. My experience is not lacking (correspondent with an award-winning high school newspaper; won a Scholastic Gold Key in the state of California, editor at a nonprofit literary magazine, etc).

I never saw the point of line edits. I'm a rising senior in high school (impending college apps, gag me with a spoon) so line edits would be terribly inconvenient anyway. I can give you a breakdown of what I saw from every chapter, what I thought of the character's actions, plot, etc. Big-picture stuff.

I can read 25-50 pages at a time and will send back critiques every Saturday afternoon (12-1 PM PST). Please PM me if interested.

UPDATE: I won't be able to take any more projects for a while. Sorry!
 
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Need a Beta for an Action Thriller

I'm looking for a beta for an action thriller. The MC is a former military interrogator who is now a DoD contractor. Nothing he does is like anything you've read about in the press. Waterboarding is crude and ineffective. Beatings, imprisonment, electocution are the techniques of amatuers and sadists. Although he's the best, he's also burnt, damaged and recognizes the toll his occupation is taking on him. He will quit after his final contract. But his skills entangle him in a plot to attack an American nuclear power plant and he can't abandon his duty to country until he has stopped it. The problem is, for the first time in his career, he's wrong.
 

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Hey Writers!

I'm here to offer my services as a beta reader. I am currently pursuing an english major but have been doing technical writing for most of my career.

I'm a pretty voracious reader and am willing to beta read a wide variety of genres. However, I will give preference to the following:

* all horror genres and subgenres. I like experimental horror. I will read torture porn or your victorian ghost stories. Just make sure they scare or disturb me.

* sci-fi. I'm in love with mars right now, anything centred around colonization/exploration. Also space operas hold a special place in my heart. All types of dystopia are welcome.

* technothriller/military/cop/action/procedural/crime - Whether its clancy-esqe or like the destroyer. Big fan of cop novels and procedurals ( think body farm novels ).


Please feel free to pm me with a request. I will generally want to look at the first five chapters first before I commit to an entire read, that way I can determine if my betaread will be helpful or useless.

Be specific on what type of beta read you are looking for and I will tailor my critique to that. Also, please make sure that you have proofread/edited. I'd like to read somewhat polished work.

I look forward to some good reading :)
 
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Availability: AVAILABLE - and I'd love to swap MS's!

Preferences: YA ANYTHING

Not Interested In: Non-fiction, historical fiction, erotica, romance, mysteries, hard sci-fi and high fantasy

Critique Style: I like to do line-by-line, via track changes in Word. I'm pretty thorough. I'm only a stickler for grammar in the beginning, and then I sort of assume you'll get my point and incorporate it on your own. Other than that, I'll give you my general impressions of the novel.

Critique Focus: Character development, writing style (i.e. overused phrases, awkward phrasing, that sort of thing)

Time Frame: I'd like to read a couple chapters at first to see if we're a good fit. Afterward, I can finish the whole thing in 2-3 weeks, depending on how much I like it! If there's simply no way I'm going to get through the thing, I'll let you know and give you the portion I critiqued.
 
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**Update: I am still available to beta read, but on a limited basis as college is currently consuming my life.

Do: Anything YA or NA that catches my interest. I have soft spots for contemporary, fantasy, and dystopian. Edgy subjects are not an issue.

Don't: Horror (YA or otherwise), adult fiction, memoirs, or non-fiction. Nothing against these genres, I just don't read enough of them to know how to give an informed critique.

Critique: I'm best at line-by-line, but I can also do big picture critiques. I prefer to avoid first drafts because I get too distracted by typos/grammar issues to give a good overall critique.

PM me if interested. :) Let me know the genre, what the book is about, and what you'd like me to focus on. Also, I like to read the first few chapters first, just to make sure we'll be a good fit.
 
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Preferences (none too vital):
-Strong/interesting voice
-Experimental
- Moderately complex plot
-"Something new", be it a new take on a genre, a clever style, etc
- Decent grammar/spelling. I'm willing to point out the odd typo or lapse in an MS, but not copy-edit.

Will Not Read:
-Incomplete manuscripts.
-Nonfiction, unless it's intended for a Very wide audience (e.g. Derren Brown's Trick of the Mind, celeb autobios)

Uncomfortable With: I am horribly postmodernist; nothing's shocking.

Critique Style: I can/will pretty much go with what you want, which somewhat relates to timeframe (i.e. more detail takes longer). If left to my own devices, I will make lots of 'in depth' stylistic points initially, so you understand the rule/point I'm making and can apply that to the rest of the MS. For the rest I'll make more scene by scene reactions, musings etc. I look out for plot inconsistency, things which seem out of place, ambiguity. I'll sum up at the end, see if I recommend any major structural changes, discuss marketability and so-on.
What I Write: My shorts tend to be pretty much contemporary, often with some kind of embedded message. My novel is a big mess, three parts, dystopia, literary and ?fantasy?. The overarching theme is the narrator meddling in all three.

What I Want in Return: I guess a straight swap, if we've got into one another's work and feel compatible.

A spot in the acknowledgements never hurts either...

Conditions: English language should be competent at the very least. I will respond honestly to what you send.
I guess just 'being able to take crit' is important - when taking huge amounts of flack for my own writing, I sometimes felt like "man, s/he just doesn't get it", but eventually realised it's the writer's job to make sure all readers get it.

How to Contact Me: Treat me like a warm-up round for contacting an agent. Send me a PM with a pitch along with details (MS length, genre, some kind of query if you like, how you take your coffee [but Not synopsis, as it'll ruin my honest reaction to plot development]) and a small reading sample (first 10 pages?). If I like it, I'll ask for the first chapter (or prologue if you prefer) and send it back with comments, so you can either seal the deal or break it off.

If you agree to offer it, expect me to read "about" 20k words/week, depending on your 'detail' instructions. If for whatever reason I don't want to finish the MS, I'll just tell you asap, along with a detailed feedback report of where things went down hill for me.

Other info
-I'm currently jobhunting, so the speed situation could change. Although it's unlikely :(

PS- I used CharacterInWhite's post as a template, kudos to him. His head seems screwed on.
 
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