I'm actually reading it (curiosity got the better of me). My biggest issue with it is that the writing's awful. As my friends and I would say, it's 'simples' and very naive, littered with so many beginner errors, eg, a) using names all the time in dialogue, like ‘Ana, what are you doing?’ / ‘Jose, nothing, I swear!’ / ‘But Ana, surely you can see…’ b) using crutch phrases constantly, hers is ‘oh my’! c) overegging the same point and over. That’s just 3 examples. She falls into a bunch more 'first writer' traps. I'm finding it quite distracting. I'm just hoping the kink happens soon to make it all worth it ;-)
Yup, there's no doubt it's swagger jacking Twilight. I've read Twilight and there are so many similarities to it, it's unreal. THIS is why it's popular. It's appealing to people who want more Edward and Bella with all the kink too. Yeah, sure, there's no vampires in it but really? Twilight wasn't about the vampires, it was about the relationship (if that's what u wanna call it) between sophisticated, intense, over-powering Edward and clumsy, ditzy, ordinary Bella.
As for whether I see a problem with this? Legally, it stands. There's plenty of books that do this. But it just narks me, as a writer who writers original stuff, that this bird got millions for it. But meh, that's just life.