I have a scene where an experienced rider and swordsman is laid up in a healer's house. He thinks he witnesses the healer perform a ritual in which the healer's apprentice died, but the rider is heavily sedated. When the rider wakes, he sees no sign of the apprentice ever having been there, and indeed the healer tells the rider that he must have been suffering from fever-dreams, since he's been laid up at the healer's for days now.
So, say this healer actually did kill his apprentice, and took the rider's horse to conceal the body. When the rider mounts again, would he notice an adjustment to a saddle, misplaced bit, etc?
I should mention that prior to arriving at the healer's, the rider was bucked and knocked unconcscious. So he could attribute an errant saddle or something to that. Essentially, I am looking for suspicions that can be rationalized away, leading up to the payoff of the rider finding the body later and realizing he's been duped. Make sense?
So, say this healer actually did kill his apprentice, and took the rider's horse to conceal the body. When the rider mounts again, would he notice an adjustment to a saddle, misplaced bit, etc?
I should mention that prior to arriving at the healer's, the rider was bucked and knocked unconcscious. So he could attribute an errant saddle or something to that. Essentially, I am looking for suspicions that can be rationalized away, leading up to the payoff of the rider finding the body later and realizing he's been duped. Make sense?