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I would just like to say hello to all the users here. I am Nathan Payne a web developer student from Dundee, Scotland.

What am I here for?
Well I have had a strong passion to make a movie for a year or two now and I have tonight started writing my script and need help with it. I have a story in my imagination but I just need the help in getting it on the paper (or should I say computer?) I need people that now how to write a good script to read over my very short two page script and tell me where I am going wrong or if something needs clarified or fixed then please tell me, you guys will be the first to read this as I just finished typing it a few minutes ago.

All feedback is good feedback so if you think it is bad then please state why and what I should do to make it good.

I am a newbie but I can talk all the critisism that you will hand to me, but only if you show me how to fix it :)

My script can be found here

Thanks :)
 

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Hi, Nathan, and welcome to AW. There's a forum for script writing you might want to visit, and a place to share your work, too. Check out the boards, and you'll find the right places to post your work.
 

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The "Share Your Work" sub-forum is where you post things for feedback. Good luck!

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Greetings and welcome aboard. :welcome:
 
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