SciFi/Fantasy First Line Game

Between graduation from college and my first day at my new job, I believe something was dumped into the water to make everyone in the world dumber, less curious, and more prone to grunting.

My blood is blacker than an executioner's mask.

I love the smell of wet werewolf.

After the revolution, bottles of bee pollen traded for ten times their weight in manticore pelts.

I was undercover as a house golem, wearing three inches of thick clay to hide my identity.

AVS said:

Eight zombie citizens with their heads blown off; if I believed in fairy tales I'd swear a human did this.

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Howdy, AVS!

Good to see your entry here, but I'm afraid this looks like a grammatically incorrect sentence. The semi-colon should only be used when conjoining two independent clauses that are closely related to each other. In this case, the first clause is a fragment without a verb. I'm not even sure a semi-colon is appropriate in the content you are trying to convey.

Thanks!

My entry:

The fruit bats in Malchiones Canyon always dream of a world that is right-side up, even though they are hanging up-side down.