I'm looking for someone (or more people) to betaread my latest Dark Fantasy story.
I recently finished the third draft of this story and I want to know if there are some things I could improve before releasing it to the market. Because I'm not a native englishspeaker I could also use an extra set of eyes to seek out any spelling, grammar or syntax mistakes.
Summary:
Blood has been stolen from the hospital and she has noticed. Doctor Delaware, resident psychiatrist, alerts a local reporter with the news of a juicy story. Her intentions are however only to prove to herself that she isn't going mad and the mysterious figure stalking her is very real.
I recently finished the third draft of this story and I want to know if there are some things I could improve before releasing it to the market. Because I'm not a native englishspeaker I could also use an extra set of eyes to seek out any spelling, grammar or syntax mistakes.
Summary:
Blood has been stolen from the hospital and she has noticed. Doctor Delaware, resident psychiatrist, alerts a local reporter with the news of a juicy story. Her intentions are however only to prove to herself that she isn't going mad and the mysterious figure stalking her is very real.