=Mr Flibble;9143216]In general third, Bufty would have a point.
Would I? I have no idea what's meant by 'general third'.
In third
limited we are limited (note the word) to what the POV knows/hears/sees/thinks. That's why it's called limited.
No- it's 'limited' because it's limited to one POV character at a time per scene, per chapter or whatever even though there may be more than one chosen POV character in the tale.
If we are in limited, then a caveman thinking (for in limited it is supposed that the narration -- much like first --
is the POV character) a caveman thinking "wow, that was fast as a ferrari" is going to sound off.
Of course it is going to sound 'off'. That's a perfect illustration of wholly inappropriate word choice if that is what the narrator (who is not the POV character) reports the caveman POV character as 'thinking'. But to leave a common expression such as a double-take out of narrative because it is 'anachronistic' is plain silly. Folk have been double-taking since the beginning of time - even though the origin of the expression may be attributed to the movie industry. Any reader would know what the expression meant and wouldn't blink an eye upon seeing it in descriptive narrative.
When I write third limited -- also called close
No- to me, 'close' is a fancy sub-category of Third person Limited-- POV my narration IS the character -- what they think, how they think about the world. There is a certain distance -- it's easier to say describe why the Z-drive is a pain in the arse when you go faster than light or whatever -- but essentially you only give the knowledge the
character has, not the knowledge the author/narrator has.
Nobody would disagree that the narrator revealing knowledge that is unknown to the POV character would be narrator intrusion.
If, in the other hand you have set up the narrator as someone from now, it won't. (pratchett frex often speaks of real world stuff, but his narrator is clearly not his characters)
Omniscient POV done well usually works and the narrator in omniscient is the only POV.
So anyway, perhaps a mix up of terminology? (happens all the time with POV!)