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Is it;
The only light in his sparse dwelling were from an assortment of candles.

As msn word suggests, or

The only light in his sparse dwelling was from an assortment of candles.

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Word is correct. "Light" is the subject, & "was" responds to that. But even if the subject was "an assortment of candles," it would be "was."

The only light in his sparse dwelling was from an assortment of candles.

An assortment of candles was the only source of light.

Candles were the only source of light.
 

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Baywitch said:
Is it;
The only light in his sparse dwelling were from an assortment of candles.

As msn word suggests, or

The only light in his sparse dwelling was from an assortment of candles.

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I guess I worded this wrong, but it doesn't matter except that word was wrong so don't depend on it.

Word changed it to were, I didn't think that was correct.:Shrug:

Anyway-- thanks Sage!:Hammer:
 

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Oh yeah, I read that part wrong. Word was wrong! You were right! :snoopy:
 

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It looks like Word was having trouble identifying the subject of the sentence.

These sentences came up as gramatically correct in my version of Word:

  • The only light in his sparse dwelling was from an assortment of candles.
  • The only light in his sparse dwelling were from an assortment of candles.
  • The only light was from an assortment of candles.
  • The only light were from an assortment of candles.
  • The light in his sparse dwelling was from an assortment of candles.
  • The light in his sparse dwelling were from an assortment of candles.
Adding "that was" after light produces ("The only light that was...") the correct grammatical response. Interestingly, removing "only" and "in his sparse dwelling" also produces the correct grammatical response. As does replacing the word 'light' with 'brightness' in the original sentence.

I'm not surprised Word has a problem with the word "light" - it's an adjective, a verb, a mass noun and a count noun - and each of those parts of speech works differently in sentences.

Computers have real problems identifying whether a sentence is grammatical or not, because no one's figured out a way to get a computer to parse language correctly. It's a similar reason why machine translation results are dubious at best.

I turn the grammar checker off when I'm writing.
 
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"Was" is correct. "The light...was." Don't trust a computer to do grammar.

But "The only light in his room came from an assortment of candles" is a bit more interesting. Or "An assortment of candles provided [gave, furnished, dispensed] the only light in his room."
 

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Just as an alternative (a bit more show versus tell):

Candlelight flickered and fitfully divided the pitch in the sparse dwelling.
 

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Ahhhhhh

scribbler1382 said:
Just as an alternative (a bit more show versus tell):

Candlelight flickered and fitfully divided the pitch in the sparse dwelling.

Thank you, yes that is a much better way to say it. I've been reading alot on 'show vs tell,' lately.

Thanks everyone.

It seems that I'm learning there is ALWAYS room for improvement. What I thought was a finished project is in the works again. How and when do you say, Basta! Enought!?
 

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As noted, "was" is of course correct. But the initial confusion in this sort of disconnected subject-verb agreement can itself be a signal of a grammatically correct, but clumsy, sentence, or at least a sentence that could be rephrased into a more succinct and straightforward form (like the one I just wrote here is).

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