Beta reader needed. *Untitled dystopian-future / literary novel. First 20-30 pages. Want*pointers on style, pacing, content, etc.*Will read 30 pages of yours. Harsh criticism welcome.
Rough query:
The Common Evil answered humanity's biggest questions and placed it on a peaceful path of sustainability. *But seventy-five years later, mankind still awaits a savior. *When a powerful stranger comes to Phoenix, he must decide if the salvation men hope for is one he can give them.
Rough query:
The Common Evil answered humanity's biggest questions and placed it on a peaceful path of sustainability. *But seventy-five years later, mankind still awaits a savior. *When a powerful stranger comes to Phoenix, he must decide if the salvation men hope for is one he can give them.