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Beta reader needed. *dystopian-future / literary

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Beta reader needed. *Untitled dystopian-future / literary novel. First 20-30 pages. Want*pointers on style, pacing, content, etc.*Will read 30 pages of yours. Harsh criticism welcome.

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The Common Evil answered humanity's biggest questions and placed it on a peaceful path of sustainability. *But seventy-five years later, mankind still awaits a savior. *When a powerful stranger comes to Phoenix, he must decide if the salvation men hope for is one he can give them.
 

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After reading more on AW, I believe my request is more suited for the Share Your Work section.

my apologies.
 

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Thanks for thinking it through. Remember, once you have it up at the appropriate SYW board, double check it for font size (at least as big as AW's default) and blank lines between paragraphs, since copying from word processing doesn't always produce readable posts.

Then add a link and maybe a teaser to the SYW post in your signature line, so people will say to themselves, 'Hey, looks interesting, let me click on that!'

Maryn, helper monkey
 
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