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I can’t seem to find a way to word the following that doesn’t sound awkward to me.
I have started out with a simple: I was cursed.
This sounds fine to me. But when I go on to talk later about the “curse”, I can’t seem to phrase it right.
I am trying to demonstrate the first time the curse comes into action and I have said:
“This was the first time the curse struck.” Ugh, that sounds terrible to me. Is that right? Do curses strike? Is that even the right verb?
It doesn’t sound right to me, but I can’t seem to phrase it any other way. I think I am too tired of staring at the damn word on my screen now….
Help from someone in a genre that uses curses would be greatly appreciated. (or from anyone as well.)
I have started out with a simple: I was cursed.
This sounds fine to me. But when I go on to talk later about the “curse”, I can’t seem to phrase it right.
I am trying to demonstrate the first time the curse comes into action and I have said:
“This was the first time the curse struck.” Ugh, that sounds terrible to me. Is that right? Do curses strike? Is that even the right verb?
It doesn’t sound right to me, but I can’t seem to phrase it any other way. I think I am too tired of staring at the damn word on my screen now….
Help from someone in a genre that uses curses would be greatly appreciated. (or from anyone as well.)