I normally hang out of in MG land, where we have a thread to discuss MG books we are reading. I didn't see one here, so I'm starting a thread--hope that's Okay.
I read If I Stay a while back and something's bothered me ever since. The book is told in present tense with flashback into Mia's past. The writer does a good job of moving from present to past and back; so we get to watch the events as they unfold. But here's my problem:
The first two lines of the book are foreshadowing:
"Everyone thinks it was because of the snow. And in a way, I suppose that's true."
She's talking about the snow causing the car accident, but the story is present tense and that hasn't happened yet, so how can she know?
Nowhere else in the story does it move back to past tense, except when she's remembering past events of her life. So I see a big gaping POV hole here!
Am I missing something? Or did Forman just take a huge liberty with POV, assuming the reader would not know?
I read If I Stay a while back and something's bothered me ever since. The book is told in present tense with flashback into Mia's past. The writer does a good job of moving from present to past and back; so we get to watch the events as they unfold. But here's my problem:
The first two lines of the book are foreshadowing:
"Everyone thinks it was because of the snow. And in a way, I suppose that's true."
She's talking about the snow causing the car accident, but the story is present tense and that hasn't happened yet, so how can she know?
Nowhere else in the story does it move back to past tense, except when she's remembering past events of her life. So I see a big gaping POV hole here!
Am I missing something? Or did Forman just take a huge liberty with POV, assuming the reader would not know?